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I\'ve just discovered your fics and have finally finished reading them up to the latest chapter. You have made Marcus, Terry and Adrian my new favourite fandom characters. I think it\'s because of the level of realism you have in your writing. It gets rather boring reading fics where everyone has the perfect relationship which is why your writing is so refreshing. Your characters have real issues that most teenagers go through and it makes you feel like you have a connection with each and every one! I love the Marcus/Katie relationship, simply because it is a wonderful relationship but they don\'t live in blissful tranquillity all the time and this makes them so much fun to read. Oh, and did I mention hot? gah! *melts into puddle*
I like the other slytherins better than the other gryffindors. Angelina and (partially) Alisha seem to be very selfish of their own needs and ignorant of the feelings of their lovers. The slytherin males seem to hold very mature outlooks on life and relationships, accepting bi-sexuality and promiscuity without question or judgement, simply understanding. Tarquin and Daria kinda squick me though, eww in-breeding!! I don\'t really want Adrian back with Angelina, because she doesn\'t really seem to deserve or understand him but I don\'t want him staying with Daria either. It seems as though he\'s already found his soul-mate in Terry. Talk about star-crossed lovers!! I love that Natlya and Aurelius are trying to repair their marriage, they really do seem to love each other even if they do seem to get their wires crossed an awful lot!! I\'m also hoping that Alec and Mariah end up together. I mean, as weak-willed as she seemed for following Billy\'s orders, she really seemed to suit Alec and he deseves someone better than a bint who only feels comfortable when someone is telling her what to do! I can\'t wait for the next update!! Please post again soon!

Bravo, bravo, bravo!!!! I am so glad you are working on this story again!! What a awesome chapter!! Things seem like they might just work out for everyone!! I love happy endings!! Hope you write more soon!!
Peace,
Shannon

what a turn of events. things are looking up. i hope they stay up. at least for this story. another sequel could take things to different levels again. i like how things were resolved with ally and terence. it was quite nice how they made up. the sex wasn\'t bad either, but really, when is sex bad? hehe i was expecting more from the duel, but it was also resolved nicely. i can only imagine what will happen to billy. surely, that can\'t be the end of her part in this epic. and how sweet it is that aurelius and natayla are (might be) parents again. i wish them the best. hurry up and get another chapter up. i\'m anxious already.

You are such a brilliant writer, I don\'t know how many times I have read your Last man on Earth and the Luckiest Man on Earth,
they are just 2 great stories, full of life and complex relationships of all ages.

Unfortunately there is one drawback, we readers are never satisfied, I know I\'m addicted so although you\'ve just updated,
Please, Please update soon. (Also your Hermione & Draco story too please)

i adore you!!!!!

you have made my entire week blissfully happy;) i\'ve been in such stress these past weeks that i really thought i will never see the day that i would be happy again. thank you, thank you for this amazing update, i love the whole outcome of the story;) terry and ally together(hopefully for good now), my dearest natalya expecting a baby(beautiful), katie is doing great, and aurelius ahhhh, aurelius flint, what a classy man!!!! i can\'t help it but adore him, he has definitely shown to be a very, very nobel man with such a distinct class that sets him apart;)

hope to see more updates to all your amazing stories;)

lumen1

Through this story and its predecessors, I have been very impressed with the humanization of the Slytherin as a whole. They\'re humans, just like the rest of us, and although they make good villains when needed, it\'s nice to see that they too have the foibles of the rest of us.

I like how this parallels the last bits of PoA, although I think that, given when the climax of PoA occurred, I would expect the teachers and the prefects -- even those in Slytherin -- to be stricter than they had been.

But overall, quite good. I shall await updates with bated breath.

PS: I did like the sex bits.

YES! You updated I am soooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooo excited, I am addicted to this story!
Keep updating and keep writing new stories!!!

Thanks again
Shelby

woohoo, another chapter. i\'m sorry to hear about the hardships during the holiday. i hope everything has sorted itself out for the best. and what a chapter to come back with. very exciting stuff. edge of your seat, nail biting tension. don\'t you just love cliches? poor billy has bit off a tad more then she can chew. i wonder if she will really die. i can\'t wait to find out.

Woohoo!! I am so glad you are back! I was getting worried. Hope all is going better for you. Blessings to you and yours!

Oh you have been missed, my best wishes go to you and I hope whatever happened comes out
best for you and yours.

As for the chapter, as usual, it was Brilliant! I love the conflict between the Slytherins and Billy,
but, Senior Flints (forgot how to spell his name) calling Billy out in a duel, fabulous, Albus\'s few words
were very potent.

However you don\'t say about the baby being all right, it is isn\'t it?

Please update soon, Wonderful to have you back.