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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it has been a very very long time since you have updated and I\'m dying here! I love this story so much so I would love you forever if you updated soon!
<3 4Ever
Shelby
<3 4Ever
Shelby
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe a party. i can\'t wait to see all the debauchery that will surely come. i\'m glad marcus didn\'t take katie\'s free pass. although, it would have made for some angsty drama. well, you know me, i\'m a mean guy. look what i\'ve done in my stories lol. i wonder how trashy the party goers will dress. can\'t wait to find out.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, it\'s been a while since i\'ve read ur updates & they are fantastic!! i absolutely luv this story, so please complete it asap. im confused because i know in early chapters u said that this fanfic would also feature alicia/terry\'s relationship, but why are they breaking up and terry is confessing his love to adrian and vice versa. anyways, i still luv katie/marcus\'s relationship, keep up the AMAZING work & update soon!!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how I missed your update, still found it now.
What a really great chapter, loved Katie and Marcus really loving and hot. Terry and Adrian was
sad but good as well. More please enjoying it so much.
What a really great chapter, loved Katie and Marcus really loving and hot. Terry and Adrian was
sad but good as well. More please enjoying it so much.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! You *had* to break them up didn\'t you? I want to cry... Poor Ally and Terry. ::pouts:: You\'re mean. Well, I can\'t wait for the next chapter. You\'re awesome. Keep writing!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t reviewed before, especially since I\'ve been following your Katie/Marcus series for over a year now. This and your other story, Last Man on Earth are awesome pieces of fanfiction and you manage to do something that is so difficult to pull off, sex with a plot. Great job and please keep writing, all of your work is amazing.
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I just had to be review 300. I\'ve been reading your stories from the very beginning, but I don\'t ususally review because, well, I\'m kind of a jerk. But now that I\'m here, I will simply say your writing is phenomenal and I am deeply in awe of your talent.
-Tygris
-Tygris
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Great chapter!!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked is right. that was very cool. the fight between marcus and katie was handled very well. and the make up was even better hehe. i think what i liked most was the reference about lupin. that really puts things in perspective and gives the story a timeline. of course, having that timeline now gives us a bit of a problem. it means that some of your cast are only fifteen. fred, george, alicia and angelina were all in their fifth year when lupin was a teacher at hogwarts. katie was fourteen. what a tangled web we weave. anyway, creative licence. it doesn\'t detract from your wonderful storytelling. since the end of the year is approaching for your estwhile pair, it means that the story is soon coming to an end. very sad news. sigh. i wouldn\'t mind much if you decided to make it a trilogy. hint hint. whatever happens with katie and marcus, just make sure you keep writing. you are a wonderful writer. keep them coming.
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE Please, you have no idea what it\'s doing to me when I don\'t see an update. I\'m addicted to this story and I\'m going through withdrawal because you have not updated!!!
-shelby
-shelby