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for The Luckiest Man on Earth

by AureliaFlint

schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....you WANT me to die, don\'t you?? **cries** GEORGE WEASLEY, YOU ARE A DEAD MAN!!!! Ali, Ali, Ali... WHY can\'t you just suck it up and SAY WHAT YOU WANT??? You\'re going to hurt Ter, and then he\'s going to give up, but he\'ll always remember how she touched him like no other girl did and and.... **WEEPS** YOU TWO NUMBSKULLS!!!! Rip your hand out of that bloody redhead\'s and SNOG THE HELL OUT OF TER!!!

**pants**

Okay, rant\'s over. XD Other than that, I LOVED the scene with Katie, Marcus, and her brothers. I cracked up especially when Marcus mouthed \"hormones\" to Owen, and when he declared he needed to obliviate himself. **laughs** And poor Alec... **sniffle** I wouldn\'t have minded seeing a bit more about the two of them in the shower tho\'. **grins** Loffly, m\'dear, as usual. XD
person Amy
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'d first like to say (refering to your AN on LMOE), that your story was a pleasure to read. Corny I know but it had to be said, lol.

Second...

Nice chapter! I didn\'t expect Katie\'s bro\'s to go without out a fight (in a sense). And I forgot that Ally said she\'d go to Hogsmeade with George! I was well shocked when I read it! lol, Also I\'m loving Alec. He should definatly be in it more, maybe even a few more sences with Terry....

And where was Terry?!?!?!?! Wonder where he spent the night...

Later
x
person Lessa
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A good strong start right out of the gate for this sequel. I loved your character run down at the bigging very funny. I was so thrilled to see this up today, made me do a little chair dance of joy even. The meeting of the brothers with Marcus went a lot more smoothly than I expected and I\'m delighted that you couldn\'t resist adding Tarquin, Chris, and Sarah. They are adorable little buggers and should just add to the mayhem you have planned.
person JennaSlytherin
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that chapter was hilarious!! :) The confrontation was too funny!

What is Ally doing? Crazy wench!

This story is fabulous, and I am so excited that you are keeping this up!!!

person kare
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry and update!
person jaelyss
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so very glad you\'ve started the sequel. It really seems to be the start of something completely new and exciting for this fic. I loved your character synopsises. I still love the secondary pairings, as much as I adore your Marcus/Katie. Still angst and angst with Ally, her conduct with George irks me, maybe she doesn\'t deserve to redeem Terry ( ver very far off thought). My eyes are set on Terry now, even though he is the biggest manwhore ever. Still, he is confused and he needs to settle down eventually. If Ally straightens up about what she wants, then maybe she can set him straight on what he really wants in life. Ok, babbling now. See you in the next chapter.
person OliverWoodsGal
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never thought that woulwould get this new fic up so soon! And I loved it how you thanked everyone at the end of the last fic. It makes it so easy to review a fic like this, cause it\'s too brilliant to just into words.
I can\'t wait to see how this fic is going to go.
And you\'re right, I do feel that the character alive when I read this. It\'s your great writing.

Can\'t wait to see how the scene with Katie\'s brothers and Marcus go.
Wonderful work.
person shaolin
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYY!!!!!! More marcus
and Katie...!!!!! update soon!
person Sandra
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looking good! I think Alicia and George should shag, atleast once, and thats it. Terry gets to hook up will different people. Alicia should too.:)
person Jo
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m soooo happy she kept going with this story!!!!! i hope she is a fast typer!!!!! lol