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very sexy... usual... you havn\'t updated in a while? what happen??? the fans must know! ;D

Hey! I\'ve been reading your first story (\"The Last Man on Earth\") but I had never bothered to review so I decided I\'d leave one to say how much I love your fics =D. Marcus and Katie make such a sweet pair and I\'m a real stickler for Gryffindor/Slytherin pairings (that don\'t include Ron or Hermione, of course). Anyway, keep up the great work and I can\'t wait for the next chapter ;).

-Whisper aka Nicole

Yes, this chapter was amazingly excellent! Katie and Marcus are so perfect together. And I\'m glad Aurelius is getting a little of what poor Natalya has tal wal with. Hopefully his jealousy will STOP HIM FROM CHEATING! Still, I\'m hoping Natalya cheats with hottie Rhys! ^_~

I do hope that Aurelius gets what is coming to him. It would serve him right to see his wife with another man! Natalya also deserves to be the object of undivided attention. She should make Aurelius REALLY grovel...make him truly realize what he just may lose! Marcus and Katie are hot as usual. Love her aggressiveness coming out. I don\'t think Marcus will ever be in a position to cheat on Katie like his dad does on his mom. Katie would kill him! Can\'t wait to see what sexy thing you have in store for Natalya. Hope she is well rewarded for her faithfulness to her cad of a husband!

Good for Natayla. She played that PERFECTLY. It was great. She\'s got that bastard of a husband right where she wants him. Now on to Rhys. (The bad boy would be happy to help her any way he can, I\'m sure.)
I loved the naked Slytherin boys all over the floor... wish I could have seen it. Yummy.
Marcus and Katie together, um, still hot. They just seem so perfect together. They make sense to me.
Cheers.

OMgosh, i so luv this story, i\'m always so exicted when theres an update, keep writing!

Along wait but I was definatly satified!!! lol

Loving Angry Katie at the beginning of the chapter, she sure has Marcus where she wants him, naughty slytherin he is!

And Tarquin, Terry and Derrick!!! What happened to Terry and Alicia?!?!? You should definatly do a chapter on Terry and Tarquin as I am in love with Tarquin and his bid to stay single as as long as possible.

Go Natayla! Aurelius is defiantly wishing he never looked at another woman, don\'t you think?

Anyway hun, keep writing!

xAmyx aka FlintsKitten ;)

that was so very hot. katie in aggressive mode was out of this world. i need to find a woman like that. lol. there were a few spelling mistakes and missing \'the\'s\' or \'a\'s\' within the chapter, but otherwise you\'re doing a wonderful job. i have to point out that a lot of your dialogomesomes across like a script. the scene in the slytherin dorm room was rapid fire and there wasn\'t a lot of action taking place. don\'t get me wrong, it did work, yet a bit more action, a bit more detail would have been good too. once you got to the sex you went into fatic tic detail, so i know you have it in you. can\'t wait to find out what happens next.

I\'ve followed both your fics and I must say you\'ve got me hooked. It\'s like a drug, so addictive. lol You are a very talented writer, the characters and the plot is realistic.... well as realistic as you get with harry potter fan fics obviously. Just thought I would tell you that I think your doing an extremely good job so far with this fic. Everytime I come online I always check to see if you have updated and I leave disappointed when you\'ve not lol Please keep up the great quality and keep writing. So thanx for making my boring nights online entertaining :)

OK I HAVE A QUESTION!!! BEFORE U HAVE SAID THAT KATIE IS 16 SO IF THIS IS TRUE IS SHE GOING TO COME BACK TO SCHOOL NEXT YEAR? AND IF SO WHAT ABOUT THE BABY??? PLZ I\'M A LITTLE CONFUSED!!! FEEL FREE TO E-MAIL ME!!! <3 Jo