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Wicked, absolutely wicked! Just when things seem to be going better, this happens! Well Aurelius is paying for his actions now! Good for Natalya for getting angry...that Aurelius is shocked by her reaction is amazing! I do hope that the mistress gets her just desserts too. As for Aurelius, how would he feel seeing his wife with a handsome young stud?! Can\'t wait, this story is so addicting!

Poor Natayla!

I can\'t believe that stupid little whore would do such a thing! Aurelius better sort it out before Natyla does something stupid (Ie Rhys, lol)

Marcus will flip his lid and I can\'t wait to see what Billy does!!! lol

Keep writing hunni

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EXCELLENT STORY I REALLY LOVE IT BUT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON\'T BREAK UP MARCUS AND KATIE I REALLY LOVE THEM I WANT BILLY TO PAY FOR HER INVOLVEMENT AND I THINK MARCUS\' FATHER DECEIVE WHAT HE GOT SO AS I SAID EARLIER DON\'T BREAK THEM UP I THINK THAT BILLY INTERFERING CAN MAKE THINGS STRONGER BETWEEN THEM SO KEEP THEM TOGETHER . AND UPDATE VERY VERY SOON, IF YOU NEED A BETA READER I WOULD BE MORE THAN HAPPY TO HELP YOU.

YOUR BIGGEST FAN
KRISTLE

wow, i really liked this chapter. and it didn\'t even include marcus or katie. you really have weaved a great web here, and have actually gotten me to care about two original characters. i really hope that aurelius and natayla work it out. you\'re teaser at the end of the chapter of what is to come is a great addition too.

Hey-o. Sorry that I haven\'t reviewed in ages... life\'s gotten very rough for me recently and had much of a chance to just sit down and READ. Plus my grandmother is currently in the hospital,catccatching up on fics seemed the furthest thing on my mind... needneedneed to get my mind off of her. So I came a looking and holy fucking squee!!!

IT\'S NOT FOR FOR TER AND ALI!!!!!

Although now it looks like Ali\'s wavering again in the last chapter...!! Nooooo!! C\'mon Ali, stick to your guns! Terence is the only man for you!! I really hope there\'s more betwen Terence and Alicia... I miss them so much!! I was also hoping we\'d see what they were up to in the tower... **grin**

Awww... poor Mariah! Billy\'s back and with a vengence it seems! Katie better watch her back! (And Billy better watch hers..rcusrcus is going to be triply protective now!) I hope things work out with Flint\'s parents... and that we see more of the main couple. XD They seem to get buried under all of the other couples sometimes. That, and I miss the longer sex scenes from Last Man. I know this second part to the story is focusing more on plot, (kick-ASS plot no less,) but do you think you could slip ONE long sex scene in there? XD (Ter/Ali sex!!!! **smites inner voice**) So I shalt continue to wave my banners for a happily ever after for Terence and Alicia together, and I\'ll try to keep up more over your drool-worthy, completely addicting stories. KEEP IT UP!!!!

P.S. I hope you\'re feeling better... you mentioned you were sick on your LJ so... get well soon!

Oh my Billy is back! Hope that Mariah tries to get Marcus\' help. I think a mad Billy would be easier to face than a furious Marcus! I do feel for poor Natalya. The guilt...but also the pleasure. Perhaps this will be the turning point in her relationship with Aurelius. Is he willing to forgo his mistresses for his wife?! I am really becoming hooked on that story line though the Katie/Marcus relationship is very sweet! Can\'t wait to read what you have in store next!

Billy is back?!?!?!?!? What a bitch! Great chapter. Lots of emo. L. Looking forward to the next! (I\'ve been wrapped up too--must make time to read fan fiction!!!!)

Ah, Billy\'s back the bitch! lol

She might think alec is boring but she doesn\'t know the true Alec, does she! lol I\'m fe for for Mariah, Bill can cause serious damage with those pictures. I woder if she\'ll tell Marcus? Does Billy know when they\'re getting married?

Anyway, as for Alicia! Well, she needs to make up her mind because she\'s leading George and Terry on, bless them both. I\'m kind of growing on the Ally/George ship so I don\'t know who I want her to choose now!!!!!

Poor Natayla! What do you think Aurelius would do to Lucius if he found out he\'s shagged his wife? lol Will he find out?

What are Bells upto? Are they still stressed with the wedding?

Keep writing chickoritta! lol

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this was an excellent chapter for character development. i liked how you showed three different perspectives with the one theme. it was very poignant how guilty natayla felt after her encounter with lucius, and knowing aurelias is feeling the same thing now that he was caught very red handed. it makes me want to see them work it all out. the intrigue was thrown up a notch with the return of Billy. i liked how her letter was just so conversational. it was so flippant, but the implications are extreme. what will happen there? and then you threw in some comedy. katie crying over nothing. damn raging hormones. an excellent story and i can\'t wait for more.

Aw, now I feel bad for Natalya and Aurelius! Hopefully than make up and all will be forgiven, although I still like HER cheating on him. I\'m a BIG Hypocrite, I know. Lol. And psycho Billy\'s back. That already spells trouble and danger. Great story.