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Chapter 21 review

Ohhhh, my oh my

AWSUM STORY!!!! it is relly cool..i read it all the time..can u plz update soon??!! (puppy dog face) pretty plz????

wow, everyone is rather confused about the baccanal eh? people are questioning their love lives. i thought katie and marcus\'s conversation was rather cute and amusing. you definitely have some interesting things afoot. can\'t wait to find out how it all works out. i\'m going to guess there will be at least one more pregnancy out there. i think it just stands to reason.

Nice one hunni!

After just coming back from holiday (and leaving all that glorious sun behind) this is exactly what I needed!

I\'m really loving the idea of Ally and Angus, I don\'t know why I just think they\'d make a great couple. Also what happened to Angie and Fred? Saucy minx she is!

Update soon hun, I need to find out if Aurelius finds out and hits the roof!

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Love the story but I have to wonder are there wizard STD\'s?

Oh wow, I\'ve just read both of your Flint/Bell stories in the past two days, staying up to all hours trying to fit the chapters in. I think deberouerous is too light a word, lol. Very sexy and smut filled. I\'m curious about what happened with Rhys and Flint\'s mother, as well as what Terry was up to at the party. Just who was he playing with? I read in your authors notes that you wanted to break up Ally and Terry but...oh please don\'t. They are the most complex couple and together they are simply steamy. I\'m interested to see what the repercussions of these revels will be...please post the next part soon :)

B xxx

Just had chance to review....

Wow! What a party that was!

Angie and Fred, Ally and Angus and Adrian and Daria! And lik like to know where Terry spent the night aswell! lol

What happened to Adrian not shagging anyone else? Naughty lil boy! Mind you Angie has just shagged her ex-boyfriend. I think Fred\'s gonna expect a bit more from her now, don\'t you? Personally, I didn\'t think he had it in him, but way to go Fred! lol

And Ally! She\'s got George, Terry and Angus after her now! I\'ve changed my mind now, I think I might want ehr to get with Angus. I think you might have to do a chappie with them both together so we can see see what they\'re like together. You never know, they both might fall madly in love with each other! But you are the creator and you are all ruling.

Katie is definatly curving pervy! lol Bless her. And Bless Marcus for putting up with all the shit that he has too.

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where the hell is terry?? i thought he would be getting some action...i mean he is the playboy...he gets it on with everyone. Angus Derrick and Ally....whoa! that will definetly strain ally and Terry\'s relationships. Perhaps they should just be uhm...how do i put this...FUck Buddies?? Angelina and fred?? I thought Angelina and Adrian are together?? aren\'t they? good god. The plot thickens....

I LOVED IT!!! SEX AND SMUT!!! *dances*

This story is awesome! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.