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Oh my. Naughty Lucius. I think he underestimates Aurelius\' feelings for his wife. I think cousin or no, that he would best keep quiet.
Wonder if their marriage can survive this. Love all the different story lines that are going on! Am addicted to this story and
the angst of the couple!

things don\'t seem to be going well for natayla. p i f i feel for her. or maybe i just want to feel her. one or the other. anyway, what a chapter. very intriguing. lucius is a great deceiver and lech. i have to wonder how far he will get, how far he will hurt the flint\'s in his little games of power. this is a really great subplot to your story. i can\'t wait for more.

I\'M SPEECHLESS!!!!

i don\'t even know how to start.... i mean, i, i thought that lucius would be the good choice as a lover, but now i can see clearly that he is definitely a HUGE mistake!!!! sure, when i started to read the scene of lucius and natalya, i prepared myself for an extremely erotic scene... and yes, it was extremely hot;) but then, it turn out to be something that so far i think it has been the most awful thing that has happened in this story. lucius blackmailing my poor natalya arghhhhhh!!!!!! i thought that he would have more class and not resort to this low petty act!!!
my poor dear natalya... sniff, snifff i trully feel for her now:( the poor woman is in total chaos... in one hand, she still loves aurelius, she yearns for rhys, and now she is commited into terrible affair by extortion ahhhhhhhhhhh.
oh aurelia, you have definitely made my head spin with this chapter... i keep thinking of what other terrible thing could happen to natalya... i don\'t even want to know when lucius finds out that natalya is having an affair with rhys... ohhhhh, and to top it all, my heart goes out to poor aurelius now... that man is suffering too much, i know that he kind of deserved this, he had it coming!!! but now that i read how he is feeling... i feel utterly sad for the quack!!!!

Aurelia, your story is AMAZING!!! i just can stop being in awe at your writing and the way you make the plot twist and turn!!!
this story really feels like a movie... like that wonderful movie called \"love actually\" , one of the reasons that movie appeal to me was because it has so many plots and subplots... you don\'t get bore at all!!!! plus they have the hottest britt actor in it*wicked grin*

ok, so now, i\'m waiting to see what is going to happen next... what is natalya going to do??? will mariah seek help from alec??? is alec going to be able to get out of his engagement ???? what is going on with fred and angelina??? what about adrian and daria???... and in that same boat, what is going to happen to terry and dariah??? ohh and now to my most intriguing question of all... what is goin on with that hot angus and alicia??? ohh, and before i forget.... are we going to see more of that wonderful book that katie has??? you know the pillow book LOL!!!!

incredible chapter like always... the quality just gets better and better;)

LUMEN1

Well it\'s me again. I haven\'t read this is so long, but I finally pushed myself to stay up till 5:00am reading it from beginning to end. Holy, your story is addictive. At some parts I have to stop and throw myself on the ground because I\'m so amused by the Slytherins. You describe each character so well, it\'s as if they\'re real. I know at other parts I have to tilt my head and say \"Awww!\". Like the part where Katie was crying because she had never been invited to Madam Puddifoots. *grin* That was so adorable. \"If you want to drink overpriced coffee and kiss, I don\'t mind.\" <-- One of my favorite quotes.

*thumbs up* I can\'t wait the the next few chapters. Hurry up with \'em \'eh? ;)

-Hiru

POOR MARIAH!!!!!

no, no, no, this shouldn\'t happen to such a sweet girl like her:( that billy apart of being a major lunatic, she is a total bully... and she says that she\'s mariah\'s best friend... yeah right!!! this is just plain cruel what is happening to her. and to make matters worst, the idiot of davis is involved in this too sheeeshhh. i still think that mariah should talk to alec and tell him everything that\'s happening!!!! i know alec loves her, and would do anything to help her out;)

ohhhh, that derrick is such a smoooooth slytherin... i love it!!!!! perfect timing to go and rescue alicia*wink* ahhhh aurelia, i don\'t know how you do it but every slytherin boy that you describe sound totally adorable and tremedously sexy, i give you 2 thumbs up;)

marcus and katie are so adorable, they are really a family... just lovely;) but you know what??? adrian is right, marcus is completely pussy whipped ha ha ha ha ha

excellent chapter!!! can hardly wait to read what is going to happen to my poor mariah:(


LUMEN1

The potion thickens! lol that\'s a quite good gag for me actaully! lol

I can\'t believe what an arsehole George was being! Especially on Ally\'s b-day! What a biatch!

It\'s official! I\'m an Ally/Derrick shipper! I love the two of them together and I love how Angus doesn\'t care what everyone else thinks, especially Gryffindor! (If you haven\'t alreayd guessed I\'m not that keen on the Gryffindors, I\'m a Slytherin gal and proud! lol)

Wonder if Terry and Angie will find out about Adrian and Daria, though both of them can\'t say much either! Angie shags her ex and Terry shags... Well terry shags half of Ravenclaw! lol

Keep writing chick

x

I love you! *uber snuggles*

Continue writing!

Great plot, engrossing story! Please add more chapters SOON!

Oh how I missed your story, I finally took this Saturday and Sunday to catch up to your wonderful story that I so much adore!!!!
I was thinking of making one big review for all the chapters that I had fallen behind, but then, I thought

Chapter 10 review

Wow, So many things happened in this chapter!!! But I