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Oh my!! I did not realize you updated so fast! WOOHOO! What wonderful smut!! I am a bit antsy to find out what that cow Billy is up to, though. Oh and the Flints divorcing, the scandle!! Hehehe. Hope to read more soon......

WHAT?!?! Oh man, no please, don\'t let them get a divorce!!! My God! The Marcus/ Katie moments are sooo wonderful!

Update soon, please

WTF!!! Has Aurelius gone utterly fucking mad? (Pardon my french) Poor, poor Natayla! First off all she has to shag Lucius whenever the bugger feels like it then when she finally goes to see her husband to sort things out he says the one thing thta she really doesn\'t want to hear! Men!

As for Billy, don\'t get me started on her! lol I\'ve just got this feeling that her \'plan\' has something to do with Katie and her family. Bless her, she really doesn\'t need it at le momento.

Right Adrian and Daria - loving the ship but what about Terry? Has there love for each other subsided or are they still shagging on the sly? If yes, will Daria mind? Etc Also I think Adrian ahd every right to finish Angie like that (You can tell I\'m not that big of a fan) because for 1) She was shagging Fred 2) She was shng Tng Terry and 3) As the story says, she tried to change Adrian and quite frankly I think she\'s fucking mental to want to do that! lol And also what will happen to Angie now? Will she go back with Fred or will she see if she can get with Terry?

Right, what next? Ah, Terry darling. Bless him, I\'m at a crossroads! I really like the Ally/Angus Derrick ship but I do also like the Terry/Ally ship so I can\'t decide! Also if Ally decides to go with either of them would she, like Katie, tell her house (Well really a Ravenclaw told Gryffindor about Katie and Marcus, but that\'s besides the point) or will she keep it all a big fat secret? Tis a very complicated thing this Slytherin/Gryffindor lark.

Speaking of Slytherins please don\'t leave Alec out! I bloody love hio bio bits!

I\'ll leave you now, I\'ve chatted on for far too long. Ciao caro!

x

Well hello! I just read all of The last man on Earth and had to re-read Luckiest man on Earth because I got confussed the first time around. That has nothing to do with you, I think I smoke too much. Hehehe. Anyhow I wanted to review and say that both of these stories are the best smut I have EVER came (no pun intended) across. My very good friend Botty and I know she reviews under a different name, which I can not recall at the moment. Once again I smoke too much. I did not review the first story because it was already completed, and I just wanted to say, you are a fantastic writter and I LOVE your work!! I was VERY impressed with the way you handled the Pagan rituals in both of these stories as well. Being as I am one, it is refreshing to know someone took the time to research it properly. I have read many, many and I do many stories, ly wly well 90 percent have been Draco/Hermione. Yours are by far better then anything I have read in that ship and that is saying something!! Although I do and will always be a Dramione shipper at heart. I am very glad I got the chance to read your stories and I look forward to the next chappie. I am so hooked. Well I am rambling, so I shall go!
Peace,
Shannon

I am long overdue in writing a review of your work, although I have been following it faithfully since the beginning of \"The Last Man.\" It\'s quite simply some of the hottest smut on the net. The multiple pairings and the variety of situations keep it interesting, and there\'s just enough plot and emotion to keep it from being mindless (It\'s NOT mindless, trust me) but without being ponderous either. Plus, there\'s something about the way that you describe their actions that\'s simply amazing.

The reason I have delayed reviewing is because I am compelled to correct two of your regular errors in punctuation (I\'m a teacher in real life). I tried to let it go, thinking maybe somebody else would tell you or you\'d learn on your own, but that hasn\'t happened, and it just bothers me too much. First of all, when addressing another person, you must always set that name apart with a comma, whether it\'s at the beginning, middle, or end of the phrase. For example: \"Marcus, you are bothering me.\" \"You are bothering me, Marcus.\" \"You, Marcus, are bothering me.\" Every time you write \"Merlin Adrian\" (instead of \"Merlin, Adrian\"), it sounds like you\'ve added to Adrian\'s name. A colleague of mine teaches this with the following example: \"It\'s time to eat, Rover\" (you\'re calling the dog to dinner) and \"It\'s time to eat Rover\" (you are eating the dog for dinner). This also applies when calling someone something other than his or her actual name, such as \"You are bothering me, you git.\"

The second punctuation bugaboo is your lack of question marks in dialogue. You are allowed to use question marks, even when you\'re going to continue the phrase with an attribution. It\'s very confusing when you leave them out. Here\'s an example: \"Do you really like me?\" she said nervously. You often only have a comma where the question mark should be, and we have to re ore out on our own that she\'s asking a question and not making a statement.

I\'m sorry it\'s taken me 50-some chapters to pass along these simple tips for better writing, and I hope you\'re not offended. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me.

Keep up the great work.

As always a fab chapter. Love the fact that Adrian is growing up and that Marcus has such confidence in his relationship with Katie. Feel bad for Angie
but really like Daria with Adrian better. Slytherins have feelings too! Love the hints about up coming chapters. Can\'t wait!

i really liked this chapter. you know, for never being introduced to daria, i really like her. she\'s sweet and \'innocent\'. those \'innocent\' girls are always the best. lol. i think it\'s really great that adrian and daria are together now. i thought your note at the end was hilarious. i guess because i\'m a male, i understood about the looking. that disclaimer was for all the ladies who read this story.

plz plz plz don\'t make them divorce!!! I made me sad enough about Adrian and Angie\'s breakup and I definitely won\'t take Aurelius and Natalya\'s divorce lightly.... :\'( -_-\' oh well, we can\'t do anything to change your mind, can we? Well, as much as I am sad about Angie and Adrian...you made an excellent chapter...as always!!

Hugs, Lily.

Great job with the last chapter, and I appeciated the outline at the beginning. I\'ve been reading this story for a while now and I can\'t remember if I\'ve left a review. It\'s about time, isn\'t it? I completely understand how people are getting confused, but I would hate for you to stop the the different pairings, because they are all so amazing and intricate. That\'s one of the thngs I love the most about your stories; there are so many different charachters and they all get great scenes written about them. Right now I especially love Adrian/Daria. When you mentioned an Alec/Daria/Adrian threesome I got so happy, until I read that you weren\'t planning on writing it. I personally think that would be an incredible loss of excellent smut, and maybe you would sometime want to write it as a seperate one-shot or something. Wow, this has become a rather long review, so I\'ll stop here. I can\'t wait to read the rest!

Thanks for clearing up the confusion. I understand that those sexy Slytherins are quite active, but I was getting confused
with who was with who before and then where they are now. Do love all the pairings though! I still like the Marcus/Katieoryloryline as well as the Natalya/Aurelius with all the added sides. Had not really been into Daria\'s storyline, but must
admit she is growing on me. Feel bad that she was hooked up with a guy who dn\'dn\'t commit. Would love to see how
Terry would react if she ended up with Adrian...jealous, but for who? Oh and now the Alec/Mariah storyline. I love that there
is so much going on! Can\'t wait for the next installment!