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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another splendid chapter!!!!
how i love thnvernversations between katie and marcus;) they are trully on their way to become husband and wife and most of all... excellent parents!!!!! ahhh, very interesting how our dear marcus got his sex education, very intelligent of him to look for bored married witches LOL!!! this shows again that mr. flint is a very cunning and astute slytherin;)
daria is definitely in love with adrian;) she is willing to do anything to make him utterly happy. i think that adrian is also falling very much for our dear daria, i just hope that he will seriously consider her for marrige;)
i love alec!!!! ahhh sooooo smooth how he suggested to them to have a little manage a trois... i can hardly wait to read that little kinky scene!!!!! you are going to write about, aren't you??? ohhh pl doo doooooo, pretty please!!!!
lumen1
how i love thnvernversations between katie and marcus;) they are trully on their way to become husband and wife and most of all... excellent parents!!!!! ahhh, very interesting how our dear marcus got his sex education, very intelligent of him to look for bored married witches LOL!!! this shows again that mr. flint is a very cunning and astute slytherin;)
daria is definitely in love with adrian;) she is willing to do anything to make him utterly happy. i think that adrian is also falling very much for our dear daria, i just hope that he will seriously consider her for marrige;)
i love alec!!!! ahhh sooooo smooth how he suggested to them to have a little manage a trois... i can hardly wait to read that little kinky scene!!!!! you are going to write about, aren't you??? ohhh pl doo doooooo, pretty please!!!!
lumen1
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!! Yes! Thank you, thank you for updating!! Off for a cold shower now! ; )
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i left this review on your other site, guess i will review in both place now LOL!!
looks like the times have definitely changed, i'm so glad that things worked out for both boys, i really love that they have found girls that really understand them and most of all love them for what they really are;) lovely the talk between ade and terry, they wilwaysways be together... maybe not as before since, they have taken the next step in life, but in feelings they will always be true to each other and will remain the first love in their hearts;)
ohhhhh noooooo sooooooo closeeeee, my dear, dear mariah seeking help from the boy that could possibly get her out of this fix arghhhhhhh. this mattes tos to be fixed and be fixed soon, this poor girl has been tormented for soooo long!!!! ahhh, my heart broke when i read that she just left and went to cry her little heart out *sniff, sniff*
mr. alec still getting back at percy.... good*big wicked grin*
i liked the chat between terry and ally, like always, very interesting... though this time it was very cute when terry asked ally if he was not as attractive and good kisser as ade LOL!!!
loved this chapter, a lot of things got clear in the term of relationships, only hope that my dear mariah can soon find peace with herself and hopefully love with a certain brainy slytherin*crosses fingers*
keep up with the excellent work;) lumen1
p.s. no, i didn't forget the kinky scene at all... it was ultra hot!!! like always;)
looks like the times have definitely changed, i'm so glad that things worked out for both boys, i really love that they have found girls that really understand them and most of all love them for what they really are;) lovely the talk between ade and terry, they wilwaysways be together... maybe not as before since, they have taken the next step in life, but in feelings they will always be true to each other and will remain the first love in their hearts;)
ohhhhh noooooo sooooooo closeeeee, my dear, dear mariah seeking help from the boy that could possibly get her out of this fix arghhhhhhh. this mattes tos to be fixed and be fixed soon, this poor girl has been tormented for soooo long!!!! ahhh, my heart broke when i read that she just left and went to cry her little heart out *sniff, sniff*
mr. alec still getting back at percy.... good*big wicked grin*
i liked the chat between terry and ally, like always, very interesting... though this time it was very cute when terry asked ally if he was not as attractive and good kisser as ade LOL!!!
loved this chapter, a lot of things got clear in the term of relationships, only hope that my dear mariah can soon find peace with herself and hopefully love with a certain brainy slytherin*crosses fingers*
keep up with the excellent work;) lumen1
p.s. no, i didn't forget the kinky scene at all... it was ultra hot!!! like always;)
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated so soon!! What a great chapter!! Hope to read more soon!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazin hunni u've outdone urself again
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I know I havn't revgiewed in a while but I hope you update soon, because this story is the best... you've been writing it for how long? A Year or So?
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well at least 'the blackout' of aff has a tiny benefit. some of my favourite stories have multiple chapters to read. of course that makes it a bit more difficult to review. just can't wcan can we? i loved both chapters. i'm very happy for natayla and aurelius. that's awesome that they have patched things up. theth sth seemed to love each other that it would have been heartbreaking to see them divorce. you have such a way with the characters. daria and adrian are great. poor mariah is a basket case now. that damn billy and her 'nefarious' plan. can't wait to see what happens there. is she trying to besmirch the flint's good name, or the bell's? i guess i'll have to wait to find out.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading Chapter 28 on Chasers. Glad I have other things to read while I'm eagerly waiting your updates. :D
I'm glad Natyla and Aurelius are back to normal, and I hope Lucius gets what's coming to him, though he is quite sexy... lol
I'm still not sure about the whole Adrian/Daria ship. I think it may be because Terry is feeling left out, lol, and it seems to me that Terry would rather be with Adrian than Aly and Aly with Angus (you've got to love him)
Mariah really likes Alec which is good because I quite like them together. I hope he works out a way to stop Billy but by donig it so theres still drama, drama, drama!
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I'm glad Natyla and Aurelius are back to normal, and I hope Lucius gets what's coming to him, though he is quite sexy... lol
I'm still not sure about the whole Adrian/Daria ship. I think it may be because Terry is feeling left out, lol, and it seems to me that Terry would rather be with Adrian than Aly and Aly with Angus (you've got to love him)
Mariah really likes Alec which is good because I quite like them together. I hope he works out a way to stop Billy but by donig it so theres still drama, drama, drama!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much aurelia!!!!!!
oh aurelia, you don't know how much i missed you!!! i was really going crazy wanting to know what the outcome of aurelius and my dear poor natalya was going to be??? the wait was long(due to a terrible server that aff. net has) but ohhh, it was well worth it... thank you soooo much, thank you for writing a beautiful chapter were we can feel the emotions that these two beloved characters are feeling!!! i just melted with the dialogue ben thn them, it was so, so perfect!!! what needed to be said, was said and their peace was restore to their souls;)
like always, your writing impeccable and the the plot superb!!!! kudos;)
lumen1
p.s. what is that cow of billy upto???? arghhh, now i'm going to be worry about that!!!! i don't want katie to suffer anything bad... well, i'm afraid that she will get really upset and perhaps that will affect her and her baby:( sniff, sniff.
oh aurelia, you don't know how much i missed you!!! i was really going crazy wanting to know what the outcome of aurelius and my dear poor natalya was going to be??? the wait was long(due to a terrible server that aff. net has) but ohhh, it was well worth it... thank you soooo much, thank you for writing a beautiful chapter were we can feel the emotions that these two beloved characters are feeling!!! i just melted with the dialogue ben thn them, it was so, so perfect!!! what needed to be said, was said and their peace was restore to their souls;)
like always, your writing impeccable and the the plot superb!!!! kudos;)
lumen1
p.s. what is that cow of billy upto???? arghhh, now i'm going to be worry about that!!!! i don't want katie to suffer anything bad... well, i'm afraid that she will get really upset and perhaps that will affect her and her baby:( sniff, sniff.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!! You updated finally,LOL!! Very touching sweet chapter. I am glad that they worked things out. I bet Lucius is going to be pissed though. As always, I look forward to more soon!