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Nice chapter Aurelia i must ask why does it take so long to update? It's so addictive i can't wait for the next chapter!

very nice the back story of how adrian and terry became lovers;) i just hope that this little get back together will not affect the relations with their girls... daria and alicia:( wow, alicia... very nervous to know what is going to happen to her, poor girl, she must be reck!!!

ahhhhhh marcus, what an adorable man;) so romantic and so not him!!! i mean, he's your typical dominat macho man that doesn't show the least amount of romanticism and to have him make this wonderful book of poems for his beloved katie... ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! ohhhhh, the pillow book II... can hardly wait to read the scenes with this new book LOL.

keep up with the excellent work!!!

lumen1
p.s. i'm really nervous with the suprise that billy has instore for katie:(

"I want you so deep that you touch my heart.

Woohoo! Well that was really sweet! Thanks for the update! Hope to read more soon!!

OK, so first, you have to understand that I NEVER review. EVER. I know, I'm one of those people that writers hate. But, honestly, it freaks me out. I don't know what to say beyond "This rocks and I am now dependent upon your story. Do you happen to have a 12 step program in place for when it ends?" I had to have a few glasses of wine (yes, I'm of age) before I could get myself to do this. Hence the lack of mental filter. Slightly more in depth, I've been reading fan fiction for ... oh, I'd say five years. I've reviewed three times the entire time. You are lucky number four. I feel prompto doo do this after four of the other stories I've become addicted to were abandoned over the last six months, apparently due to lack of interest, and the guilt is eating at me. You clearly do not suffer from the lack of interest problem, but I thought I'd regret it if I didn't say anything. This story rocks. When the fifth book came out, it had been so long since I'd read canon, and I had been so warped by Last Man on Earth that, while I was able to remember that canon dot ret really focus on Marcus and Katie, I was temporarily confused as to why there wasn't more naughtiness. A KISS! A KISS and THAT'S IT!!! A kiss she didn't even describe in real time??? Sorry. You've done an excellent job of developing lots of minor characters of the canon into interesting, well developed characters, who I can't read in any other way. And the sex and assorted naughtiness is all incredibly well described and beautifully written. Thank you thank you thank you. Oh, and I'm not sure about this, (I might be complimenting you twice here) but of the previous three reviews I've written, a year a hal half ago, one was for a story about Marcus and Katie called Sparks at Astronomy Tower ... was that you too? If it is you, please finish that one too. It's killing me waiting for dear, sweet Chris to marry Sarah, and Katie and Marcus are just so cute together and I'm so proud ofMarcus for standing up to his ... Sorry, wine babble. To be honest, I prefer Last and Luckiest to Sparks because, well, I feel they're a bit more honest and firey and passionate. But they're both well written. Hopefully Sparks is also written by you or this endorsement of Sparks will be sadly misplaced. Thank you again. Sorry for the nonsensical babble. I assure you it won't happen again. :)

It feels like forever since I had the time to do any reading, so when I did, I had to catch up on this!!!

Excellent as usual! Lots of surprises... hmmm. Thanks for the wonderful read!

I just read both of your stories Last/Luckiest Man. The Last Man was recommended to me by Rubberduck, another author in this site, and when I started reading it I expected it would be good but I did not expect it would be THAT good! Honestly, I kept reading and reading day after day (the stories are too long, lol) and now I think I

things are afoot. i'm a bit ill to think of anything profound to say, other than the usual claptrap of how great this chapter was. it is such a fun read. i almost find myself getting giddy with excitement as i read your story and that's not something a male duck will say very often. hehe. i like the adrian and daria plot line. daria is great. i like how she threatened tarquin and said she could wait. revenge is a dish best served cold after all. i wonder what's going to happen to ally. will her fears become reality? can't wait to find out.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Y DID U DO THAT????????????????????????????????????? NOOOOOO me sad nOW!!!

i adore adrian and daria together!!! they most definitely must get married;) she is so understanding of him, she loves him just the way he is and adrian, day by day is seeing the excellent qualities this little slytherin witch has;)

alicia pregnant pre pregnant by derrick:O ohhh, this can't be happening not again to my poor dear terry:( i mean, his best mate and ex-lover claims his first and formal girlfriend and now when we think that he finally has a chance to be happy with a witch... she gets pregnant by another wizard arghhhhhhh!!!! i like terry very much, heck, i love his cookieness anrty rty way... he's a good boy!!!! i wonder how he's going to take the news??? i wonder what alicia and derrick are going to do??? i truly hope this is a fluke... but then again, tarquin did put a very powerful spell to the festivities in honor of the gods.

ahhhhhhhhhhhh cow, cow, cow, cow, cow that billy... i hate her i truly do hate her!!!!!!!! what has she done???? i can't even start to think what she has done... i want to cry buuaaaaaaaaaaaaa i don't want katie to suffer and worst, make marcus more miserable with another scandalous event in lif life!!!! i think with his parents ordeal, he had enough:(

hey aurelia.... don't you think i will forgive you for leaving us with such a mega-cliffhanger... well, i will if you update a.s.a.p. i must know what that so called of a human billy did!?!?!?

like always, your story is a piece of master work.... kudos;)

lumen1
p.s. cool that you are putting your little drabbles on aff.net;) i off toish ish on your new project!!!