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for A Father\'s Revenge

by JennaSlytherin

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5........ I do hope that they will be able to finish what they started soon;-)

I knew that Ron & Harry wouldn\'t be happy, but I do think it\'s funny that Ron passed out!!! They were told to go away!!! I can only imagine what they must be thinking about the baby, can\'t they do the math or are they thinking that Hermione had used charms to cover a pregnancy?

Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person Joga
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantasticpterpter! Can just imagine the look on Harry\'s face. must have been priceless. Glad to see the passion between Draco and Herm. Keep on writing!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Ron\'s faig wag was priceless.
person Mel
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT is what I call sweet sweet revenge.... :D *giggles* Go Malfoy!! DIE RON!!! Well, fainted works too. :D
person Zephyr
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!!!~!!!!!!

person Zephyr
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear... What is going to happen next? What are Ron and Harry going to say when they find out?
person Draco_Fan
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! Update soon and YES! FINALLY some Draco and Hermione action... though it was cut short because of GINNY!m I m I dislike greatly i might add...
person elementaldeity
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, already getting hot, cant wait for more,
person Lilly
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um...just a query, but isn\'t blaise zambini supposed to be a guy? cause he is in a bunch of other stories.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Very beautifully done. I feel for Draco so much in this story. I just hope Hermione can figure out why he suddenly went cold on her, otherwise there could be *really* rocky steps ahead.


Kiri (looking forward to every step of the way, rocky or not)