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for A Father\'s Revenge

by JennaSlytherin

person hinkypunk08
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I like the sexual tension between Draco and Hermione, though annoyed that they keep getting interrupted. You might want to put in a little description as to why Hermione is suddenly attracted to Draco---I\'m hoping it\'s something beyond his looks. I like your description of Draco as a father to baby Blaise, though he seems to have gotten over Blaise really fast.
person Apollonia
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! Just when Draco and Hemione are about to get it on, Harry and Ron gotta mess everything up! Ugh! And I\'m sure some of the hate mail Hermione received was from Pansy\'s ugly ass! Anyway, really good story as always. Please update soon! :)
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really good ur a really good writer please continue i really want to c what happens next.
person DanishGirl
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved it!
person Lessa
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, like the story but I have a couple of things to nitpick/ask about the plot. Ok if they are still in school wouldn\'t the other Slytherins have know Blaise was pregnant last year and the other Gryffindors noticed that Hermione was not? Especially if the baby was six months old? And how long was Blaise and Draco married I didn\'t think they were old enough at 16 or so to get married.

I sound really picky but I think this stuff is important. How did Draco go from being a mean grief-stricken revenge minded man to having fluffy feelings for Hermione so fast? We saw no interaction between Draco introducing Hermione to the baby and now he\'s concerned for feelings and just happens to design the perfect wedding dress for her?

Just some questions I would like answers for.
person Draco_Fan
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God... That was AWESOME! Update soon! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kitten
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Please continue soon.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo! Ouch! Me thinks the it is about to hit the fan. LOL I look forward to reading more. I especially loved Hermione\'s clng ong of the child.


Kiri
person genrou
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooh, playing the role already. ^__^ wat excuse are they gunna come up with to say how they covered up her pregnancy? ill just have to wait and see i guess. please write more soon. thanks.
person Serpent du feu
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh