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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome Chapter!!!! please update soon!!!!
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6....... I am guessing that it was Ron at the door, but am curious as to who the woman & James are?!?
I dke hke how Hermione is not oliviliving up to her part, but her real feelings are growing also!!! It\'s also nice to see that Draco is making an effort to be more different from his father!!!
Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<
I dke hke how Hermione is not oliviliving up to her part, but her real feelings are growing also!!! It\'s also nice to see that Draco is making an effort to be more different from his father!!!
Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just had to review! The cliffhanger was stupendous. Who was listening to Draco and Hermione? Who is it that wants her, Harry or Ron??
And who is the woman hidden in a dungeon far from Hogwarts? It is all very interesting.
Cheers
And who is the woman hidden in a dungeon far from Hogwarts? It is all very interesting.
Cheers
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is lovely except for some typos.
Why do they always interrupt D/Hr just when things are finally heating up?! AAARRRGGHH!
Why do they always interrupt D/Hr just when things are finally heating up?! AAARRRGGHH!
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew, going all cliffhanger, please update soon, I cant take the anticipation.
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5:
\"Go Away!\" Funny stuff! Things are really starting to heat up! What a cute little family! To hell with sending an owl, let\'s just knock the door down. What a sight! Poor Ron - Not! Continue on! Shouldn\'t this be \"A Son\'s Revenge\"?
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
\"Go Away!\" Funny stuff! Things are really starting to heat up! What a cute little family! To hell with sending an owl, let\'s just knock the door down. What a sight! Poor Ron - Not! Continue on! Shouldn\'t this be \"A Son\'s Revenge\"?
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:
You go Hermione! Tell Harry how much you \"love\" Draco! But, what was she thinking, putting them in the guest bedroom? Good move to cut his hair! I can only imagine that dear ol\' Ron is no longer unconscious. Poor blokes aren\'t even married and they are facing such trial and tribulations. Wait til everyone gets back to Hogwarts! Thanks for updating so fast!
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
You go Hermione! Tell Harry how much you \"love\" Draco! But, what was she thinking, putting them in the guest bedroom? Good move to cut his hair! I can only imagine that dear ol\' Ron is no longer unconscious. Poor blokes aren\'t even married and they are facing such trial and tribulations. Wait til everyone gets back to Hogwarts! Thanks for updating so fast!
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh please update soon. a looong update
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! I can\'t wait to see Draco and Hermione get it on. Hehe. I guess we\'ll see that during the wedding night, huh? Listen, if adultfanfiction.net goes out of business, e-mail me the rest of the chapters. :) Please update soon!
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! I\'ve read so many D/Hr forced weddings already, but this is wonderful and did I mention I love it? Lol. Job very well done, and your Draco is veryy sexy. I like that you still incorporated a little bit of guilt before having the two of them ravish each other. That makes it that much more believable. Eee, I can\'t wait for more. When\'s the next update? ;)