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is it me or is chapter 4: Up the Down Staircase missing? Please fix this, I really want to read on. :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Very good! More, Please! ~Lotm

I'm surprised you haven't got more reviews for this, as it really is quite good. I think it could have stood to be a bit longer (but maybe that's just my greedy reader eyes talking). Also you never clarified whether the potion was supposed to target someone in particular or whether it was random? I just assume that it was supposed to target who you love, but then how would Voldemort know to use it on Severus? Just a trailing thought... I hope you write more SS/HG in the future!

lovely

Fantastic! That was a thoroughly enjoyable read and I happily, pleasantly, gleefully and even a bit squee-fully spent my morning with your superb Snape character! I thought that this idea was INCREDIBLY original and would have enjoyed even more emphasis on the potion and how/why it worked. You really wrapped up a BIG story in a small package and it was just delightful. Thank you for taking the time to capture this fic and post it for the rest of us! Albus can be so difficult to write and your characterization was perfect. Your dialogue was excellent - both the argumentative but also the more casual back-and-forth words between Snape and everyone else. Fun! And Satisfying!

Oh, that was truly wonderful! A romance with full snarky Severus? How much better could it get. Perhaps an epilogue with some great lemons? This is AFF, afterall. I loved the fact he was full Potions master mode for most of the fic and slow came to realize his feeling for her without going goey-soft. Very nice, I really enjoyed it. (Sigh), God I love a good romance and this was a damn fine one.

Oh, I\'m so glad you finished this! It was so heartbreaking, seeing Hermione trying to control herself, and Snape being such a bastard as if he couldn\'t help himself. Excellent job!

Just got to see this story for the first time...LOVED IT! So glad you continued on...it was fabulous! I really enjoyed the forgetful sev trying to cope with his know-it-all student and how things changed - just as it should have! nice ending...more lemons would have been nice but then again I\'m just a perv :) Epilogue? Ha-ha!

What a well written, beautiful story.