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by PotionsMistressM

person GrrArrg
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!

Her Black knight indeed!!

I hope that fucker Malfoy\'s going to get what\'s coming to him!!

Unfortunately I have to move, but I promise that as soon as I\'m back online, I\'ll be reading and reviewing!!

I did not ask Zephyr to babysit you (and if I did I\'m not paying her for it!!)

I mearly stated that since you would both be so terribly heartbroken and lonely without me,
you should chat amongst yourselves while I\'m gone!!

And yes, I do think you\'re co dependant and a bit neic cic come to think of it!!
But that\'s why I love you!! and hey, I\'m a big ol\' drama queen so we\'re well matched!!

Love ya
GrrArrg
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful four chapters there! Sorry for not reviewing sooner - but you were posting chapters faster than I could get around to reviewing!
Anyway - Malfoy is a SICK FREAK! I hope Severus kicks his ass!
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
person spaz141
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 - awwwwe too bad (as I type \"skippy\" kicks the hell out of me *smile* I had to laugh...Doctor told me she would induce(sp) me on July 31 at the latest). Back to chapter - you write action very well. What is with Draco and the sex? It must be a male domination thing. I will miss your fast updates, thanks for writing.
person Droxy
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Been downloading but you\'ve updated faster than I can read. So I will review so I don\'t get hexed. I am having fun reading about angsty Hermione., Sev is such a... jerk. I so hope HG nails malfoy for what he did to her cat, people are so attached to their pets and I was suprised at the low level reaction of Hermione. No matter what she felt about Sev, nailing a pet is a nasty thing that hurts on a whole other level.

I really like evil malfoys, the more the better, and this one is very nasty. Malfoy is already scoring points in the game, hope he scores a few more. HG is at a point where she has lost everything it seems. Malfoy has provided her somethign to fight for, while perhaps \"suicide by Malfoy\" could be an alternative? Would serv Sev right for leaving her like that-

I am also enjoying the relationship between Sev and Minerva.

Looking forward the Malfoy/SS face off. Keep on writing.

Keep
person Zephyr
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey babe! Love the new chappie.. Um more please???

You and i are going to have to hold eachother up with GrrArrg gone for a week!!!

Loved this chappie and loved Hermione Seducing Draco into letting her free!
person ArienAstera
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Reno 911 (even though I havnt seen it a lot) And I also love you. =D Update! NOW!
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That Bastard Malfoy! I hopw Severus gives that little frret what he deserves and saves Hermione. I can\'t wait to read more Update soon! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Tiffany
person ~Sarahe~
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! I can\'t to see what happens to Draco, Hermione, and Snape. I hope whatever happens to Draco is veryody ody and painful. The little git deserves nothing less...Happy writing and may the muses smiles on you so you update soon!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21... I am so glad that Severus wrote her the note!!! Too bad dip shit Draco sent the return!!! I can\'t wait to see what Severus does to the little slime bucket!!! I hope he rips off his face & breaks all of his fingers &... Let\'s just say that I just want him to cause him some PAIN!!!

I wonder if Albus will go with him or if he will even ask him? I know Severus respects Albus, but I don\'t think he\'s #1 on Severus\' favorite people list right now!!! I hope he lets Minerva know what is happening!!!

Your being on vacation is spoiling me;-) I will be watching for your next update*
person GrrArrg
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CH22

Ok Biotch you are forgiven! but only because:

A) Then he smile at me- a very I\'d-like-to-make-a-coat-out-of-your-skin kind of smile

B) The Listerine spit

C) Justin erlaerlake (Just checking to make sure you were paying attention!!)

D) Officer Garcia

She put up a good fight, now all we need is for Severus to swoop in and save her!!

What do you mean he\'s not going to??

Make it right sweetheart

Kisses
GrrArrg