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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I do get it. Strange how the human mworkworks, though, isn\'t it? Sorry to hear about your father. I nev never experienced a real loss like that. Well, not in the way that Hermione has. My cousin died this summer from cancer, but we all knew it was going to happen. It wasn\'t as abrupt and unexpected as it is in the story. Well, they all knew the final battle was going to happen, they just didn\'t really realize that it was going to happen, it was going to happen soon, and people were definitely going to die. Denial is a tragic thing.
But anyway, this chapter is very good. Poor isolated Hermione! Her parents were great though, frighteningly understanding. One thing that always peeves me about fanfics, when they name Hermione\'s parents. They always pick such preppy names like \"Matthew and Karen Granger\". No offense to any Matthews or Karens, but no one named Matthew or Karen would name their daughter Hermione. I\'m glad you didn\'t mention any names for them (you didn\'t, did you? I didn\'t notice any, if you did I\'d feel awfully stupid right about now, but I\'m too lazy to go back and check). However, if you do want to name Hermione\'s parents, be sure to name her mother Helen because in Greek mythology, Hermione is the only child of the famed Helen of Troy.... wow,ure ure like going off on tangents, don\'t I? Yet again, great writing... hope to see another quick update, despite the Xmas mania!
But anyway, this chapter is very good. Poor isolated Hermione! Her parents were great though, frighteningly understanding. One thing that always peeves me about fanfics, when they name Hermione\'s parents. They always pick such preppy names like \"Matthew and Karen Granger\". No offense to any Matthews or Karens, but no one named Matthew or Karen would name their daughter Hermione. I\'m glad you didn\'t mention any names for them (you didn\'t, did you? I didn\'t notice any, if you did I\'d feel awfully stupid right about now, but I\'m too lazy to go back and check). However, if you do want to name Hermione\'s parents, be sure to name her mother Helen because in Greek mythology, Hermione is the only child of the famed Helen of Troy.... wow,ure ure like going off on tangents, don\'t I? Yet again, great writing... hope to see another quick update, despite the Xmas mania!
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fic I\'ve read in a long time..and like everyone else, I cried my heart out. Well maybe not my heart but my eyes for sure. You are a truly talented writer and know just how to use peoples emotions to the advantage. I really look forward to more.
ArienAstera
ArienAstera
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As my memory is abysmal, I cannot say that I reviewed before but I thought I did. Although very angsty......I love it. I don\'t normally go in for this sort of thing but.....I really, REALLY like this story. Update soon?
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love it so far! I\'m a little sad that you killed all but three of the Weasley\'s, but I\'ll be ok! You\'ve got a very good start and I cannot think of anything that needs improvement, so up soo soon!
Tanya~
Tanya~
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was incredible. Definitely very well written. Congratulations, you\'re the first AFF writer to actually make me cry... well, I didn\'t actually cry, but I assure you I wanted to. One thing struck me as funny though: one second Snape is dwelling on how sad and alone he is, the next he\'s thinking about his crush on Hermione. I don\'t know if it\'s a guy thing or somethin jus just thought it was unususal (and amusing). Seriously great fic; update!
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow.. this story is.. i can\'t really think of a word describing it. a wonderful, creative, original pwithwith an awesome writer to back it up. you rule!
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well.....
You have managed to acomplish what only a few other authors (namely Shem and Rilla!) have..
You made me cry.
Great big sobs!
That was such a sad and touching first chapter, that if you don\'t continue I think I will have to come looking for you, and shake the chapters from you!
If, as the saying goes \'You start as you mean to go on\' then I can\'t wait!!
Wonderful
Big first chapter kisses
GrrArrg
You have managed to acomplish what only a few other authors (namely Shem and Rilla!) have..
You made me cry.
Great big sobs!
That was such a sad and touching first chapter, that if you don\'t continue I think I will have to come looking for you, and shake the chapters from you!
If, as the saying goes \'You start as you mean to go on\' then I can\'t wait!!
Wonderful
Big first chapter kisses
GrrArrg
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic. You get right into Severus\' head which is great. Update soon plzzz :)
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sob!!
Again I say, wonderful.
You take as long as you need to write this.
It is definitely worth waiting for!!
Hermione\'s memories of her friends at the beginning of this chapter bought the biggest lump to my throat.
Keep it up
Kisses
GrrArrg
Again I say, wonderful.
You take as long as you need to write this.
It is definitely worth waiting for!!
Hermione\'s memories of her friends at the beginning of this chapter bought the biggest lump to my throat.
Keep it up
Kisses
GrrArrg
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, this is getting more interesting by the chapter. very nice writing style.