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A week, hee hee I can wait a week. I\'m going away for a week so when I come back I\'ll pray there is a new chapter. This chapter was awesome. Poor Sev and Hermione too. Trust Sev to take it out on Hermione. Will she ever forgive him? And what\'s going to happen now cause Hermione uateuates like tomorrow hee hee. Have fun writing and I\'ll be hanging out for the next chapter :)

Well... fuck. Severus is fucked up. Hermione is fucking mad. Perhaps Hermione could kick a Slytherin\'s ass? A student perhaps. (Little bit of the old bloodlust.)
Are they going to calm down and talk to each other in the next chapter? Severus will have to go first. I can\'t see Hermione approaching him.
Keep writing.

(It is a real bummer that practically everyone is dead in your fic.)

Another wonderful chapter, darling. Sorry about all of your family as well! A few grammatical/spelling errors, though. \"All you ever do is deman or belittle us, but you are through intimisating me!\" Yeah... I think what\'s wrong is pretty obvious. There were a few other mistakes as well, no offense, of course. Do you have a beta?
Anyway, the plot is coming along nicely. Hermione PMS-ing and the getting into the revised H: AH was hilarious. I am somewhat disappointed that so much time passed so quickly. Gradution already? Snape pining and brooding is great fun. Keep updating!

omg.....*sigh* i read ur story and i just sat there like ............with tears welling up in my eyes. when he said they\'re all dead, i just couldn\'t stand it and then how they both love each other so much but they push each other away in their grief and and..when severus held her inhis arms and she cried *awwwww* *sniff* i am infatuated (great word) with this story, please email me when u add more :) ur story is \"bloody brilliant!\"

YAY! Fart jokes! Oh god... I know I shouldn\'t be saying this here at all, but I wrote my dad a poem today about farting and left it on the desktop of his computer. It was really stupid. Then I took a $5 and made it so Lincoln is say\"ex\"excuse me...\" and off to the side it says \'fart\'... god I was a moron today! Anywayz, awesome chapter. You didn\'t disoppoint me in the least bit, Potions Mistress M. By the way.. I too have a facination with the Potions Master... :S See ya later, alligator.

Another great chapter! Wonder how Sev will react when Hermione passes her Potions NEWT even w/o his class? Update as soon as you can... Ihopihoping he can convince her to listen sometime.... And on the reviews - don\'t get discouraged... a lot of people just don\'t review for some reason. I\'ve got over 2000 hits on my most recent story and 49 amazingly positive reviews, I\'m sure if those other people didn\'t like it at least ONE of them would\'ve let me know by now :).

Wow! I cant wait to see where this is going. I just love dark fic\'s, and with the amount of death in the first chapter, this is definatly on the dark side. I also like that you have got 2 POV\'s going. It makes it very interesting. Update soon!

OMG! I love this story! It\'s really well written, and I\'m already completelotiootionally involved with it. I cannot wait for more!!! Please update!

I just finished reading chapters 1 & 2, this is one hell of a story!!!

I am one that is of the mind that most any fan fic is in a sense OOC to a degree because there is really only 1 person that really knows who these charachters are, J.K. herself. I think that most of the time a writer tries to stay as true to their perception of who these people are, how they would act, etc., but in the end rt ort of the writer has worked its way into the charachter.

I think the setting that you have placed them in has altered how they would act to a great degree, dealing with so much pain & loss, they are human after all. I feel that the Severus you write in this story is very believable because he is a man of feelings that, even if only to himself, he admits to have. He loves, cares, hurts, feels anger & desire, plus so many more emotions that have been kept in check, but are now begining to come to the surface more.

I do hope that you will be able to update this story again soon as I am really anxious to seere ere it goes!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<

Another great chapter - your sense of atmosphere is perfect. I like the little humor bits you throw in, also, to keep it from being too dark... especially: \"I don\'t know if you\'ve ever been fawned over by a Hufflepuff, but it\'s something akin to being stared at by a golden retriever wagging its tail and dropping a ball at your feet.\" I can completely see Snape saying something like this! More soon, please ;). (Although I know, from personal experience, just how harrowing retail is at XMas time, so update when you can! No pressure!)