rate_review Reviews

oh man. sorry it took so long to review your two new chapters. i got to preview return of the king 2 days before it came to theatres and i\'ve been very tired. these two chapters took a turn, like plot wise. i\'ve no idea where it\'sdingding to. i kinda like it, but i\'d kinda like snape alittle darker and hermione a bit more depressed but soft spoken.. i dunno. it\'s your story and i like it so keep writing and w0000 with the fart jokes!

p.s. abe is very em-bare-assed :P

Mm. Sorry for lack of reviewing. Insomnia. Want sleep. Need sleep. Have not slept in three days. So tired.
What was I doing again? Oh yes, reviewing.
Loved Snape in this chapter. The \"God, I SUCK\" line was fucking brilliant. Not to mention the various \"I will not jack off to a student\"s. Even in my exhausted state I was cracking up at that.
I\'ve reviewed like a good little girl, \'aven\'t I? Can I go to sleep now?

Hey...still here and still reading! I love it.....so heart wrenching! Update soon?

Wow! What a quick update! Absolutely marvelous story! I couldn\'t help but laugh when you talked about Snape, dating, women, and his \"nod.\" I actually laughed out loud. I\'m quite happy to see that you haven\'t sullied the Snape I love - \"Snape-the-Bastard.\" He is still very much in character. Or at least how I would imagine him to be. I look foward to reading more!

Hell yeah!!
Oh sorry, not supposed to cheer for myself am I *smirks*

That was another excellent chapter, I love Severus\'s inner argument, but honestly, sometimes I just want to shake some sense into him!!

If you are a dork for watching WWE (my dad and my brother both love it and they are 58 and 25 respectively!) then I am a dork for lovibg Buffy and Angel!

I do think we are quite alike, from what I know about you so far, which is not much admittedly! Maybe we should hook up for a chat sometime? You can give me hints about where your story is going and I will tell you nothing!!Ha!! just kidding mate!!

My star sign is Leo, you know, loud, bossy, opinionated, likes to be the centre of attention, yep that about sums me up!!

I am really loving this story
Keep it up
Kisses
GrrArrg

No, no, no, no... why is he always pushing her away? Dork!
Well, are you going to have her meet up with him again in the future? It doesn\'t look very hopeful right now. Unless she realizes his abuse is a defense mechanism.
Write more soon please.

Chapter 4.......... THAT MAN!!! She made the effort & he really does want her, so what the hell is his problem? For once can\'t he just accept that he can be loved, that his past is just that & that he can be cared for? Can\'t he pull his head out long enough to see what\'s right in front of his face? He just infuriates me!!! Can we say that Deb can get a little too into a story!!!;-)

Can\'t wait to see what happens in chapter 5 & I really am hoping that he can get his head far enough out to accept what he needs & give her what she deserves..... in other words I hope that they can be TOGETHER in every sense of the word!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<

yeah, i knew you were joking about the fart chapter. however.. i kinda wasn\'t joking about defacing that blank note... :S Anywayz, this chapter was intense. And stuff... ya... hasta!

Very angsty. I like it though. You can see how both of them would be badly wounded by the past. Dare I hope that there will be a happy ending. I do like a happy ending. ng ang a sad ending puts me in a foul mood for the rest of my day and my colleagues at work won\'t be happy.

Now THAT\'S what I\'m talking about!!
You tell him Hermione, that fucking prick!!
OMG, You just made me call the subject of my fantasies a prick!!
Damn you\'re good, I absolutely loved this chapter,
and you know how I like my Hermione with a bit of fire in her!!
By the way, just in case you didn\'t know, I am the queen of the exclamation mark!!
See!! I\'ve nearly worn the button out on my keyboard, I use it that often!!
It\'s to substitute for the fact that you can\'t see or hear me, I am very expressive when I talk,
Very loud and arm wavey (a bit of a freak/ drama queen really)
I\'m ready for more as soon as you are, let me know.
Kisses
GrrArrg
P.s You know where I am, if you want me for anything