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Yes, you made me cry, there were a few tears. Well I guess I should say your wonderful fic made me cry. Luved the part with Sev eating the cookies. haha Sev got what he deserved, in Hermiones point of view and then he had to suffer through Amy\'s ramblings, hehe he didn\'t have a good chapter did he? I hope you haveexceexcellent Christmas (I\'m sure you will seeing as you have that sexy Sev) lol

No I don\'t think I will hit myself over the head with \"The Stand\" With the rewrite he did on it I think it would probably kill me.I have heard that about this flu before and it is just a little scary. Any way great chapter hope you feel better.

Chapter 7....... WOW, that poor girl!!! So much to have to wit with & then her feelings for Severus on top of it all!!! I do hope that Sev can get past the tongue tiess ess he has made of himself & just tell her how he really feels (he knows how much he wants her)!!!

I can only imagine how things are going to go while her extended family is there, frightening!!! I hope that he will make himself more open & available to Hermione during the wake, funeral & after!!! She really does need his support & he wants hers!!!

I really am enjoying your story & can\'t wait for more!!! Deb >^..^<

i thouroughly enjoyed this chapter i loved the passion between mione and severus, then mione\'s raging, and sev beating himself up about it. i\'m sure it would have been very interesting if mione had stormed into sev\'s office and told him but the ranting in her room was quite hilarious too. i\'m sure the graduation ceremony, as well as what happens afterwards, will be quite interesting... great job ur doing, i can\'t wait to read more :)

i liked this chapter almost as much as the last. it was so touching especially w/the inscription on the photo and how she stayed up all night singing and playing the piano and crying it was all so *sob* sad, my eyes were threatening to spill the whole time. i can only imagine what it would be like to lose my parents, but you did a great job putting the feelings into words, im so sorry about your fathers death u\'ll be in my mind and my prayers :)

Oh my god! Please don\'t kill anyone else off. There basically isn\'t anyone left. Except for Snape, McGonnagal and Dumbledore.
Poor Hermione. SOB!!!
Keep writing!

!st off, THANK YOU for the compliment as well as for adding another chapter tonight!!!

Chapter 6............. POOR Hermione!!! She has been at the crap end of the stick way more than she deserves!!! There is one thing to be said for her though, she is STRONG!!! There is a saying that reminds me of this so much: That which does not kill us can only prove to make us stronger.

I really appreciate Severus\' character here, the man does have a heart, that can not be denied!!! He cares for her so much & is once again in a position to allow her to enter into his life.... let\'s hope he doesn\'t blow it again!!! They really do need each other, even more than they want each other!!!

I do so hope that you will be able to add chapter 7 soon (I doI don\'t expect it as quickly as you added this one)!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

Ch 5
\"I have said it before, and I am quite sure I will say it again.
I am a complete and utter fuck-up\" - Severus Snape

Pure class, are are you reading my mind, I tell myself this daily!!

Your Hermione is one of my favourites, I love the way she talks and I love the way her mind works, I guess that means I love the way your mind works, As I\'m sure that those of us who write HG/SS fics are really just expressing our \'Inner Hermione!!
I have never said this to another writer before and I\'m surat tat the hate mail will flooding through my mailbox
But I can\'t keep up with your speed posting!! I just got the email about ch 5 and look ch 6 is here too!!
I\'m not complaining, I\'m v.v happy!!
I\'m glad to see that you\'re owning up to calling me evil *sob* You\'re a bloody fine one to talk!!
I will tell all my friends to have a read and have put you at the top of my recommended fics will that do!!
Ah Gemini, split personality huh!! Never mind I love you anyway!!

Don\'t worry about the reviews, I think it\'s good manners to review if you\'ve read and enjoyed a story. The writer has obviously sweated over it and will be anxious to see if people liked it, but some lurkers just don\'t see that, I don\'t think that you can appriciate it unless you have posted a fic (God I\'ve turned into a fanfic snob!!)
That said I am off to read chapter six now and then I will review again, coz I\'m good like that!!
Kisses
GrrArrg

Ch 6

How could you do that to Hermione?!?
I\'m going to read it again and then I\'ll review, once I\'ve finished crying and laughing and trying to hex you with a cigarette (think very small wand!)
Back soon
(No kisses for you evil wench!)
Grrarrg

Ch 6 The review!!

There are so many things I don\'t know where to star
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\"I\'d end up working at some terrible retail for for the rest of my life! I\'d be twenty years old and managing a Claire\'s for God\'s sake!\" - I\'m right there with ya!!

\"I don\'t have a dad.I don\'t have a mum\"
Snape explaining what had happened was heartbreaking in every way.

Just as i dried my eyes after that, you came up with this: \"\"Just a bit early to see the Headmaster in leather chaps.\" - The images of Dumbledore dressed like Christina Aguilera in the \'Dirrty\' video will stay with me forever!!

\"Jeez, Granger, keep up this inner monologue and you could be a stand-up comic if the whole \"witch\" thing doesn\'t pan out\" - I bow to your genius, and say \'I\'m not worthy\'

There were so many more outstanding moments in this chapter but I know you only wanted a review not an essay so I\'ll stop here!
You are going to be pissed with me anyway, because you think you\'ve got three new reviews, but they\'re all from me!!
Serves you right for being so brilliant!!
I hope this is going to be a long fic (my favourite kind!) because I just love \'Sev and Hermione from the mind of MissM\'
Extra big kisses for this most excellent chapter!!
GrrArrg