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Wow. Hot, hot, hot chapter... loved it completely!!! Really liked how you had Severus hold back from doing the actual \"deed\". One of my favorite lines: Dear God! Did Severus Snape, president of Assholes Anonymous, just use a pet name?. I giggled out lat tat that!

Something about myself... I\'m 29, have a hubby (irritating) and a 2-year old son (cute). Work full time as a computer geek/systems analyst. And I love reading and writing SS/HG fanfic (under handle WendyNat - I have two on aff.net if you\'re interested; Time Does Not Heal All Wounds and Some Scars Never Fade)

Just finished reading the chapters and I have to say that this story is quite good. I like the way you have charaterized dear old Severus, and Hermione\'s way of speaking is just as I imagine it to be. The topper though is the way you described her reaction at the wake and the funeral. It was so very realistic and heartwrenching. Great job! (I do hope that it wasn\'t gleaned from personal experience, however. If so I am sincerely sorry for your loss.)

I am looking forward to the next chapters! If you\'d like please drop me an email when they are posted. HeroBenedick@yahoo.com.

Live long and prosper
Titania
Author of :Fucking with Snape and Travels with Severus: Severus does New Orleans

I am loving this! I am surprised this is your first fic! Great story... KEEP GOING!!!

Baby got back was just genius! I could just see Harry imitating Snape singing that song. Brilliant.
At least they are somewhat together now. Is he going to try to push her away again? Cause that would be just crappy. I hope not.
I look forward to what comes next. Oh, thanks for pro promise to not bump anyone else off. It takes a load off of my mind.
:-) grins.

Another excellent chapter!!

Your smut was great, very well written. Must have been hard (excuse the pun!!) to write from Sev\'s point of view.

Hermiones \'If you wantedto remember them\' list was very sad, and very real, I cried for them.

I see Shem popped in!! and offered to beta for you, you should feel honoured, she\'s one of the best authors out there *Oh shut your hole, Shem!! Now Now, did you send me an email? Coz I think I\'ve done something really stupid. I get a lot of spam email and as I was going through it the other day and reporting it, I think I may have mistakenly reported your email address (I\'m such a git somtimes!!) Can you send me one to the usual address and then to my hotmail address to let me know and I\'l try to rectify it!! so sorry, don\'t know why they let me near a keyboard!!

You will be pleased to hear that I bought Evanescence\'s CD today because of you and will be listening to it tonight when I rewrite ch of \'AHCC\' *See my LJ for the full rewrite story!!* and am planning to tell the other half that MissM says that he must \'Respect my Authoriteee!!\' I\'ll keep you posted
You, as always rock!
Chat soon
Ksse
GrrArrg

You don\'t really want me to write about myself do you? you already know it all!!

30, other half, 2 step monster, Watford, England, cat, Buffy & Angel, HP, Tattoos, Alcohol, Cigarettes blah blah. If I missed anything it\'s all in my LJ or just ask for specifics!!
Kisses
GrrArrg

Well shit.. am in deperate need of knicker change here, thank you very much.. truly.. thank you! *grin*... Nice finger work there m\'dear.. err.. in more respects than one...

And as for that whole \'Sev running off to marry both yourself and GrrArrg\'.. I have to ask... Does GrrArrg know that you have said this to me?... am highly interested to know her response... seeing as though...

well can\'t say.

But you may have Filch, seeing as though noone else is willing to take him... Sorry love, Sev is all mine..

Am looking forward to next chappie emmensly...

~Shem

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Firstly, Am going to kill GrrArrg when I see her... Am most certanly NOT on the the best authors out there.. am just honest and opinionated and I guess the \'imperios\' that I cast on her hasn\'t worn off yet...

Secondly, forgot the little A/N thing... am 24 year old single with 2 parasitic attachments, aged 5 and 3... am fic author, latent satanist and goth.. am one of the owners and admin mistress of Lord and Lady snape... my loyal minions include, MetaMuse, Corazon, GrrArrg, Rilla, Daya, snapesbbwlover, Fervesco... under me, my minions and I plot for world domination of the SS/HG world and keep safe from all others the sanctified body, mind and soul of one Potions Master named Snape and my one ambition in life is to become a Death Eater and sparr one on one with Lucius and his pimp cane (with Sev backing me up... in more ways than one *grin*)...

So.. would say drop me a line, but you have done that already, so instead I say.. keep dropping me lines!.. am always in need for a keeper of the lesser Death Eaters..

*smirk*

~Shem

This has truly become one of my favorite stories. I am always for a slow build-up(no matter how FRUSTRATING!!) and you have done this so well. You have maintained character personalities but put so much imagination into what we do not see in the HP series. I appreciated the story even more this week as my best friend\'s mom has just died suddenly. Grief is such a personal and odd thing. You are never quite sure how you will react, but I think you capture so many emotions well. Post again soon. You are doing a wonderful job.

Happy New Year and many thanks,
Susan

Have just finished reading what has been posted to date in one sitting and I must say that I am highly impressed. I have not been visiting AFF a lot recently, and as such I knwo few of the authors around here anymore. In cases such as this, I look to the reviews an authors has to see if the fic is worth my time looking at, an to see if anyone I know and respect is enjoying it...

In this light I have to say that is the reviews left by GrrArrg that convinced me that this may be (and was) somthing I enjoyed... She is one of my favourite minions and I occasionally consider her opinions as.... intelligent?... educated? sycophantic dribble? *grin*

So...to my review of your story...

Brilliant!... this is a well thought out and interesting premise, intelligently written with a morbid, dry selfself analytical and delightful humour runnng through out. There is a enough angst to keep the reader enthralled and on the edge of their seat without turning off the fluff reader...

Actually.. on the matter of fluff.. well smut actualy,... am wanting to know when you are going to see fit to include some shagging?... Not that I live vicariously Hermione\'s sexual exploits with Sevvie or anything.. afterall I am his official keeper.. *fuck off GrrArrg!*...

Now I am going to do something highly unethical here... *looks around to make sure coast is clear*... Would love to see the little errors here and there remedied so as you might comsider posting this at Lord and Lady Snape... GrrArrg told me that you were a little hesitant about posting this and needed a little push in the right direction... I don\'t want to be presumpuos... or err.. intereefring and pushy *fuck off GrrArrg!*... But if you do not have a beta and would like one, I offer myself for your services... nothing major.. just stuff you are probably missing due to familiairty with the text...

So... on the whole have to say I love it and shall be waitng for more with baited breath

*rapidly turning blue*

Much respect ~ Shem ...