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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. BTW that last review was for chapter 6. This one is for 7. I think I\'ve gotten that right. If not, excuse me, myself and my various split personalities apologize.
No, we don\'t.
Yes, we do.
Shut up!
No, you shut up!
Can\'t we all act like adults here?
Some of us aren\'t adults!
Speak for yourself, kiddo.
Once again, I\'m sorry. My doctor says I have multiple personality disorder, but we disag
A
Anywho, interesting chapter. Liked the smart people and classical music thing. Sadly, I, as a self-ordained intelligent person, do like classical music. Actually, I like every kind of music. Except country. Well, most country. Some country I don\'t mind. Um yeah, must stop getting off topic. Damn tangents. And sines. And cosines.
Anyroad, poor Snape. Lof faf family. Whoa. Very much family. Cute thing with the lack of driver\'s license and the obliviate. Never heard of the Cleveland accent. Sounds interesting...
No, we don\'t.
Yes, we do.
Shut up!
No, you shut up!
Can\'t we all act like adults here?
Some of us aren\'t adults!
Speak for yourself, kiddo.
Once again, I\'m sorry. My doctor says I have multiple personality disorder, but we disag
A
Anywho, interesting chapter. Liked the smart people and classical music thing. Sadly, I, as a self-ordained intelligent person, do like classical music. Actually, I like every kind of music. Except country. Well, most country. Some country I don\'t mind. Um yeah, must stop getting off topic. Damn tangents. And sines. And cosines.
Anyroad, poor Snape. Lof faf family. Whoa. Very much family. Cute thing with the lack of driver\'s license and the obliviate. Never heard of the Cleveland accent. Sounds interesting...
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Still on flo floor after the Sir Mix-a-lot bit*
Bloody hell, woman. I\'m not even British but those words seemed to fit. Bloody hell. That has to be one of the best ideas I\'ve ever heard. If I ever feel juvenile enough to play a game of Truth or Dare ever again, I am adapting that Imperio to a fucking fantastic dare. Tragically, I\'m fairly certain I know far more about the song \"Baby Got Back\" than I should, including most of the lyrics. When I said I liked basically all music, I meant it.
Don\'t worry about the smut scenes, you\'re doing fine. I\'ve never written it myself, personally. You think you\'re lacking in experience? Trust me, dearie, you\'re probably a porn star in comparison to my exploits. I mean that as a good thing. Really.
By the by, must apologize for my strange behaviour in my previous review. Especially all the topic-changing. My doctor says I have A.D.D. but - Oh look! A chicken!
Bloody hell, woman. I\'m not even British but those words seemed to fit. Bloody hell. That has to be one of the best ideas I\'ve ever heard. If I ever feel juvenile enough to play a game of Truth or Dare ever again, I am adapting that Imperio to a fucking fantastic dare. Tragically, I\'m fairly certain I know far more about the song \"Baby Got Back\" than I should, including most of the lyrics. When I said I liked basically all music, I meant it.
Don\'t worry about the smut scenes, you\'re doing fine. I\'ve never written it myself, personally. You think you\'re lacking in experience? Trust me, dearie, you\'re probably a porn star in comparison to my exploits. I mean that as a good thing. Really.
By the by, must apologize for my strange behaviour in my previous review. Especially all the topic-changing. My doctor says I have A.D.D. but - Oh look! A chicken!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck me! whatthefuck??.... Don\'t you know that the golden rule in SSHG fanfiction is that Dumbledore is suppose to turn a blind eye to Sev and Herms or alternatively push them together on account of him being a doddering old fool who is wacked up on an illicit substance infused into his lemon drops???? GAH!!. Ha. Have to say that is the most reaction I have ever seen Dumbledore have inregards to Sev and Herms \'intimate\' relations, and I have to say that it was so true to real life that it was scary...
Am not liking my Sev hurt lady... *narrows eyes*.... please fix your otherwise fine story now... err... well soon... before you make a very powerful enemy.... Lucius is going to be punished tonight because of this.. I think Sev has been through enough... *grin*
Am most pleased that you have ded tod to joi ran ranks.. there are many young Derath Eaters requiring private tutaledge.... err... Crabb and Goyle we may use as target practice for some more interseting spells and hexes if you don\'t want to babysit them yourself...
Now.. am off to ..errr.. well... bah.. I dunno... will find something, or rather someone to occupy my time with until Sev is feeling better *mental note tto self, Stop lending out Sev so much... he is really in need of a break*
Until next time...
~ she
Am not liking my Sev hurt lady... *narrows eyes*.... please fix your otherwise fine story now... err... well soon... before you make a very powerful enemy.... Lucius is going to be punished tonight because of this.. I think Sev has been through enough... *grin*
Am most pleased that you have ded tod to joi ran ranks.. there are many young Derath Eaters requiring private tutaledge.... err... Crabb and Goyle we may use as target practice for some more interseting spells and hexes if you don\'t want to babysit them yourself...
Now.. am off to ..errr.. well... bah.. I dunno... will find something, or rather someone to occupy my time with until Sev is feeling better *mental note tto self, Stop lending out Sev so much... he is really in need of a break*
Until next time...
~ she
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW!!
Firstly, I am so honoured that you dedicated a chapter to me, especially an emotionally packed timebomb like this one!! I was as you state very hung over and as I have just finished a thirteen hour shift (Yes 7.30am till 8.30pm) this was exactly what I needed so thank you so much, I feel so loved *sob*
Second, the review, I just crowned Shem \'The queen of all things angsty\' and she doesn\'t play well with others (No you don\'t Shem!) so I can\'t give you that title but MY GOD woman that was some powerful emotional angsty chapter.
Can I just say to Albus Dumbledore \"You can kiss my JLO sized arse!\" what a wanker, excuse the language!!
He cannot keep them apart, you cannot allow it MissM!!
Favourite lines included \"don\'t know what my sudden fascination with having Snape for breakfast, I mean, Snape having breakfast was\"
and \"Oh, bugger it! I\'m a Potions Master, not a Charms professor\"
I love the way that you can infuse humour and angst into all of your chapters, thats really hard to do!!
Queen of all that is smutty? I definitely don\'t deserve that title but thanks anyway!! I am not actually from Watford but I do live there now and yes that is where Geri is from. I actually live on the same estate that she grew up in!! I must admit to being a bit of a closet Spice fan myself (closet because of 1) my age and 2) in England the only people who liked them were under the age of nine or teenage boys!!) Geri was always my favourite, she is quite the hottie!! You musical tastes are as strange as mine!!
South park is very big over here. Another thing that I love and my other half hates (He\'s 13 years older than me so I don\'t think that he gets a lot of the things I like!!) But I love Cartman, the fat girl inside me that is always fighting for dominance thinks that he is her role model!!
O.K I\'m finished with my essay length review now (Fuck off Shem, I can\'t help it, I ramble, so sue me!!)
Chat soon, yes? somesome chapter (honoured I say!!)
Big Kisses
GrrArrg
P.s By vampires, does that include Buffy and Angel or am a just a saddo in that department?
Firstly, I am so honoured that you dedicated a chapter to me, especially an emotionally packed timebomb like this one!! I was as you state very hung over and as I have just finished a thirteen hour shift (Yes 7.30am till 8.30pm) this was exactly what I needed so thank you so much, I feel so loved *sob*
Second, the review, I just crowned Shem \'The queen of all things angsty\' and she doesn\'t play well with others (No you don\'t Shem!) so I can\'t give you that title but MY GOD woman that was some powerful emotional angsty chapter.
Can I just say to Albus Dumbledore \"You can kiss my JLO sized arse!\" what a wanker, excuse the language!!
He cannot keep them apart, you cannot allow it MissM!!
Favourite lines included \"don\'t know what my sudden fascination with having Snape for breakfast, I mean, Snape having breakfast was\"
and \"Oh, bugger it! I\'m a Potions Master, not a Charms professor\"
I love the way that you can infuse humour and angst into all of your chapters, thats really hard to do!!
Queen of all that is smutty? I definitely don\'t deserve that title but thanks anyway!! I am not actually from Watford but I do live there now and yes that is where Geri is from. I actually live on the same estate that she grew up in!! I must admit to being a bit of a closet Spice fan myself (closet because of 1) my age and 2) in England the only people who liked them were under the age of nine or teenage boys!!) Geri was always my favourite, she is quite the hottie!! You musical tastes are as strange as mine!!
South park is very big over here. Another thing that I love and my other half hates (He\'s 13 years older than me so I don\'t think that he gets a lot of the things I like!!) But I love Cartman, the fat girl inside me that is always fighting for dominance thinks that he is her role model!!
O.K I\'m finished with my essay length review now (Fuck off Shem, I can\'t help it, I ramble, so sue me!!)
Chat soon, yes? somesome chapter (honoured I say!!)
Big Kisses
GrrArrg
P.s By vampires, does that include Buffy and Angel or am a just a saddo in that department?
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Liked the chapter! Your bio is interesting. I too am a semi goth for the same reasons, eventho I am in my mid 30\'s. I must confess to being a punk rocker in high school as well. I still listen to the music! I love Evanessence as well, Static X etc. Vampires rule and if I can\'t have Sev (Swoulwould be pissed and I don\'t mess with dear Shem! She\'s awesome!) then I will settle for Lestat. (I am actually thinking of writing a story with a vampire wizard)
Anyway, I am rambling. Too little sleep I imagine.
Post the next, please!! Soon!!!
Titania
PS- Since you like vampires, I am going to pimp a WIP. It\'s called Travels with Severus;Severus does New Orleans. It\'s here on AFF under Titania. Snape and OFC-Not a Mary Sue (I hope-but no flames thus far)--T
Anyway, I am rambling. Too little sleep I imagine.
Post the next, please!! Soon!!!
Titania
PS- Since you like vampires, I am going to pimp a WIP. It\'s called Travels with Severus;Severus does New Orleans. It\'s here on AFF under Titania. Snape and OFC-Not a Mary Sue (I hope-but no flames thus far)--T
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I am so fucking pissed at Dumbledore. What did he think as das doing? I can understand that she is still a student and sexual relations of any kind should be forbidden between teach and student. But to say that Hermione did not love Severus and that there was no way she ever could was WAY overstepping the bounds. I am so riled up by your chapter. AAARRRGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! Did Dumbledore catch a clue when Hermione went back to her room and cried??? It is obvious in your fic that they desperately need each other. Stupid fucking Dumbledore.
Write more soon. Damn, I am pissed off.
Write more soon. Damn, I am pissed off.
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Can\'t wait to see them end up together. Dumbledore should just butt out!!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pardon me while I cry. I think my hejustjust broke, that must be what pure angst is. I have never read Dumbledore written like this before, he was appaulling, she isn\'t even a student anymore and she\'s an adult in the wizarding world. Ugh. Thanks for writing.
About me - 37 married three kids (4th on the way), full-time mom, two part-time jobs. Joined the HP world in July 2003 after being disappointed by OofP. HG/SS not my favourite ship, however, the stories are more a plenty and generally waaaay better written. Not a writer but faithfully review every story/chapter I read.
About me - 37 married three kids (4th on the way), full-time mom, two part-time jobs. Joined the HP world in July 2003 after being disappointed by OofP. HG/SS not my favourite ship, however, the stories are more a plenty and generally waaaay better written. Not a writer but faithfully review every story/chapter I read.
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I though your Severus POV smut was well done, you shouldn\'t have worried. Thanks for writing.
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I see you too are a \"Beauty and the Beast\" fan. I know you asked for a little info about us when we review, but my details are for me to know and everyone else to find out... sorry you\'re left in the dark. Thanks for the new chapter, especially since I am once again healthy enough to enjoy it. I hope you had a happy Yuletide season.
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