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by PotionsMistressM

person deblovesdragon
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I am first lieutenant huh? Right hand man (woman). Cool. Just let me know and I will take them out. :-)

Doesn\'t Severus need a blood replenishing potion or some fluids or something to replace the blood loss? I do have faith that Hermione will take good care of him.
I am also glad that she has read his letters to her. Very romantic stuff.

Cheers!
person spaz141
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 - taking a break from the angst? Nice, Hermione got to read the journal. Your Minerva rocks. I hope Severus doesn\'t push her away now that he is waking up. Thanks.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13.... THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! 1st a Thank You for having Hermione be the one to save him, 2nd for Minerva being on Hermione\'s side, 3rd for him waking at the end & last, but fromfrom least, for writing yet another FABULOUS chapter to this AMAZING story of your\'s!!!

There was so much in this chapter, humor, fear, frustration, LOVE!!! I love the \"I may have to break my swollen foot off in his candy-ass\", TOO FUNNY!!!

I am glad that she now knows why he left her home & at least part of the reason that he hasn\'t come to her since she\'s been there at the castle!!! I am so very curious as to what the unresolved issues are between Severus & Albus?!? Albus is way high on my shit list here for what he has put Hermione & Severus through!!!

Truth be told, I\'m glad that Hermione\'s not pregnant & that we didn\'t miss anything... I want to read about it when they actually make love for the 1st time!!!

I can\'t wait to see what happens in chapter 14, them in the same bed, him waking up & hearing her words of love for him... hhe\'he\'s not too weak from the loss of blood & that he still has enough blood in him to make things (actual his thing) work without passing out;-) Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person Jessie
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I accidentally stumbled upon your story and was completely drawn into it! I\'m one of those talentless people who is addicted to fanfiction. I\'m always amazed and
astonished when I read a story so well written (I have to say that, since envy is a sin;-) What a phenomenal first effort! The latest chapter, has stressed me out...you
can\'t leave Severuke tke this for too long.....what would I do without him? (I suppose, I could fantasize about my own hubby). I definitely understand the draw of an
man, I married my hubby a week after I turned 18 - he\'s 14 yrs older than me. We just celebrated our 24th anniversary...and he\'s still sexy to me! Keep up the writing!
person wild child
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate dumbildor they so should be together and have babys and stuff they\'ve been tro so much.
could you please email me when you update.
and please update soon.
person spaz141
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IMO grieving is life long. Thank you for kindness. It can be quite unnerving sometimes how a story effects you. The angst is breaking my heart, can I please assume that Severus does not die? Thanks for writing.
person shemhamforash
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you to Shem (that comma-hating bitch) for betaing!

*ahem*

*raises eyebrow*

*mumbles* Damn bloody comma WHORES *cough*

*smirk*

Liked the chapter... made much more sense with no distraction...

Carry on!

Shem
person WendyNat
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! Oh, horrible evil cliffhanger... will Albus find him? Will Hermione find him? Am keeping fingers crossed that Shem\'s influence doesn\'t make you kill him ;). Thank you so much for reviewing my stories... very nice when an author I admire reviews my stuff. Anyhoo - eagerly awaiting more... more... more...
person JennD
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What a fantastic emotional chapter. You make it difficult to have the patience for more!
person Louise
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how I missed this story before. So today I read the whole thing. Wow, WOW, WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! What a good story. Please stop what ever it is are are doing right now and post thet oft of this story!!! No eating or sleeping for you!!! Quit your job, leave your family - do what ever it takes!!! (Just Joking!!!)