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Love your fic, but I hope Albus gets his talking-to some time soon. And I\'m still eager for some Malfoy-bashing :P

Keep up the good work!

*waves* its me again. I tend to forget stuff when I reveiw. I know i mentioned snape being out of charecter a little bit but I realized I didnt explain where I saw this. There were two things I noticed that kinda made me giggle because it was just something you would never see snape say. I can only remeber one though and that was earlier on when Snape said something \'kicked ass\' As an author we can charecterize the person as we see fit but even with your charecterization it just seemed really awkward to have snape say that.

I also forgot to add I LOVE your use of humor. I love darkfics but you can only be so dark until you\'ve done it all. You have to add another element in there and your humor just works so well. I was copying and pasting parts to a friend as I was leaving. the whole hufflepuff as a puppydog thing was great. I also loved hermiones comment \"I Have people who understand me... crookshanks.... ect\" I loved that!

Chapter 14... Another FABULOUS chapter my dear!!! Having Severus tell Hermione of his past was very eye-opening & so sad!!! I did like how you added this part to the end of his admissions to lighten up the mood a bit & make way for the next portion that was a bit more light hearted:

Must check ingredients in pain potion. Seems to slightly, okay- dramatically- reduce inhibitions. May be profitable if one has dark intentions...

The songs that youse fse for this chapter were PERFECT!!!

I do so hope that you will be updating again soon as I really want to see how things go between them while Albus is away!!! I want to see if they use this time to its best advantage!!! I want to see iey cey can make plans to be able to ogetogether even after Albus comes back & to see if Minerva will help them!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<

I love this story. I am quite fof stf stories where Dumbledore is seen as a manipulator and not the sweet old man everyone thinks he is. I do hope you will keep writing and eventually finish this work. I find it very entertaining and well written.

i don\'t like threats, but i do like this story i like the concept and i can only hope that albus gets what\'s coming to him

This is an awesome story! I love the humor, morbid sometimes, but this is exactly what I would feel during times of stress. Please, please please continue! I would love to see Albus get what he deserves. Minerva is great and I like that she is all for Hermione and Severus. Dobby\'s new wardrobe is great too. This is a great work of fanfiction and you should definitly take pride in it! I am definitly looking forward to more whenever you can put more up.

You never disappoint me, Hon...this was a great chapter. I am so happy that the two shared some deep emotions. I want Hermione to give it good to Dumbledore for putting such undue strain on her and Severus\'s developing relationship. Ugh...KILL...CRUSH...DESTROY...uh...sorry...Please keep up the good work and I look forward to more.

Red

Fantastic story please please update soon i love it and would love to see some Smut between severus and hermione soon please pretty please. And you also need to make hermione put dumbledore in his place he has no right

ok, ok , ok i\'ll review!!!!!(LOL) just don\'t stop it\'s good! keep up the great work & please update soon! (=^-^=)

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Sniff...I have been reading this religiously since its start and I love every word of it. I really wanted to cry reading of Severus\'s agony of not being able to be with the woman he loved and Hermione\'s desperation to get him to acknowledge her. Such pain. I appilppily looking forward to see what develops now.

Much love

Red