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Awesome couple of chapters! I still can\'t believe how blind and stubborn Dumbledore is being! Anyway . . . very sweet scenes . . . nice background of Severus\'s family history. I would seriously love to see a separate story made up of just Severus\'s \"journal\" entries to Hermione . . . would be inteing ing to read . . .
Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D

You are welcome of course. I have to go and cry again. Chapter 14 - beautiful, communication, tears and ... understanding. What more could a reader ask for, well, maybe another chapter? Thanks, love this story.

Hurrah!!

You updated!!

That was fab. I like the idea that pain relief would loosen the tongue, alcohol does it for me!!

But what now??, do we have smut? Does Albus find out?Is thre a happy ending??

Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!

I\'m assuming that the fact that you have gt seventeen reviews for this chapter (so far, including mine!!) means that you will be continuing with the story and so I won\'t have to bombard you with thirty e-mails a day to convince you to keep writng this wonderful story????

Kisses
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First the review...
He\'s awake! Yeah. His story was so sad. (Not that I was expecting cute fluffy lambs or something.) I also appreciated her ustanstanding of his past and his life as a teacher. The vicious cycle of mocking from students and his conscequential loathing of them. That he can go beyond that with his feelings for her is really cool.
Is Hermione going to rip Dumbledore a new one when he returns from London? I really wouldn\'t expect anything less from her. (grins) She won\'t tolerate his interference anymore. Not after she has lost so much. She won\'t lose Severus on top of everything else. RIGHT, RIGHT!!!!

Second the other stuff... Well, I am trying to think of a decent superhero name. Perhaps \"Cannonball\" (my maiden name is Cannon) or Hot Mama (could have a groovy 70\'s costume). I am thinking along the lines of \"The Tick\" superheroes. Or a \"Mystery Men\" style heroine. Should it be something darker?
Glad to help with the potions idea. :-)

I LOVE this story. In total there have been 3 stories that have made me cry and this is one of them. This plot is awesome. I really can\'t believe I haven\'t found this story earlier. It does seem though at times your taking Snape a bit to far out of charecter. I am seeing him say or think things that are more of your words than snapes. Its not to huge of a deal but I noticed it.

Also begging for reviews only makes people want to review the story less. I know it helps to ghe she suggestions and what not, but there are more clever ways to get them ;)

you want more reviews befyou\you\'ll start updating? okay, here\'s one. please, please, please update soon. i want you to kick dumbledore\'s butt. yes hermione is his ward, but can\'t he see how unhappy he has made both she and severus? he should at least have allowed them to talk. maybe you could have them fake the romeo and juliet death scene and dumbledore could lament his interfering ways. or maybe minerva could teach hermione how to be an animagus and she and severus could sneak out together? i s ths the logical thing would have minerva talking dumbledore into chaperoned visits but that would be too boring. how bout they get married next week while he\'s still gone? nah, too simple.
you see you are the creative genius, not me... so get writing! aloha, mele

Ok so this is going to be difficult for me as I am french and english is not my speciality BUT I do love this story and I would not want for it to be interrupted because the author feels lonely and misunderstood. A lot of angst filled with romance between two of my favourites HP characters is alltaketakes to bright my day so please go on with the story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There, maybe this is not the most inspired review you will have but it comes from the heart with simple but true words.

I have truly been enjoying this story enormously. May I juommeomment that I think it would be wrong of you to not update again just because you are unhappy about theber ber of reviews you receive. Anyway I do hope you decide to continue.

I apologize for not reviewing earlier. I love your story and the way you have portrayed the characters. I especially like how you have Albus as the asshole over-protective bastard. ow tow that Dumbledore can\'t be all sugary sweet all the time. The man is human after all. I look everyday for updates, please don\'t stop. Please? *begging*

~Coriander

LOVED it mate!! Cried when Severus almost died. SO glad he FINALLY cracked a smile!! :) Songs were very moving with this chapter.:)