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by PotionsMistressM

person WendyNat
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Had it been up to me, I would have jacked Dumbledore right in the chin.\"

Heehee. Loved that line - loved the whole chapter. CanNOT wait for the next one!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... My Dear I do hope that things get better for you at your work!!! I will be more than happy to wait between chapters because each chapter of this AMAZING story is well worth the wait!!! Beyond a doubt you keep this story interesting!!!

Of course I read the words of the songs, they are very fitting to the story!!! I do like Evanescence a lot!!!

Well now onto the chapter... I believe that , with the exception of the end, my 2 favorite lines were: 1. \"The man picks odd timo geo get all moral.\" 2. The resumption of classes severly cut into my \"masturbating to thoughts of Hermione\" time.

The whole flirting & them pushing the envelope of getting caught was very well written & mixed with a perfect amount of humor!!!

Draco, Draco, Dr I d I do not think you have a real clue as to who you are messing with here!!!

Now, to my absolute favorite part of this chapter... the music room & the confrontation with Albus!!! I ADORE the way that twerewere behaving, \"making out as furiously as two sixth years who had just discovered the irresistible pull of sex\" as you put it;-) I can just see Hermione in pain during the fist clenching moment!!! GO HERMIONE, put Albus in his place!!! I just can\'t see Albus looking for her in Severus\' bed after she laid out to him JUST HOW THINGS ARE!!! I am very happy that, after all that Albus put him through, that you let Severus get in the last dig... BRILLIANT!!!

If you can\'t tell, I LOVE this chapter because Severus & Hermione are finally going to get to be together!!! (You know I LOVE the whole story!!!) I will be watching for your next update*
person Jenny7611
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! I loved Hermione\'s response to Dumbledore, great stuff. This ter ter had just the right amount of humor. Now I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen with the notes. Keep up the great work!
person Kiristeen
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::giggles:: I LOVE Hermione\'s response to Dumbledore! : ) Yum! I look forward to more.


Kiri
person JennD
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hehehehehehehe* GO HERMIONE!!!! Most excellent chapter!! They should have stayed where they were though - piano benches can be so much fun ;)
person Kristen
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Well ... you are quite an amazing write, Mary. haha - and since I have never read Harry Potter, I thoought I\'d be completely lost, but thanks to your other references (to Billy Madison, Bridget Jones\' Dairy, High Fidelity, etc.) it was easy to understand and closer to home. And man, even I was cheering for the two to hook up! Great job and good luck with the job tansfer! -- Love, Your ex-employee
person Reha
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick note to let you know I\'m enjoying the story, and that your author\'s notes crack me up. :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mary, I do hope that everything gets straightened out regarding your work!!! I don\'t think you deserve a smack because I know that when you are able to update it will be something well worth the wait!!! Take care & TRY not to work too hard!!! HUGS, Deb >^..^<
person Kate McGuire
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic for the first time. Stunning, it is 3:38 in the morning and I am still up reading it. Dumbledore is such a self-righteous ass! Go McGonagall!
person Texas Peach
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Please continue.