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WOO-HOO!!!!! mutters *guess what they say about slytherins being sex gods is true!!* hehe

Hmmmmmm. While up waiting to see if Return of the King wins the Oscar, I decided to check if anything had updated here at AFF.net. What a wonderfully pleasant surprise to see an update to this marvelous story. Again, like oth other chapters, you have taken me on a rollercoaster of emotions, from laughing out loud to almost in tears.

Excellent chapter, very heartwarming and \'sigh\' worthy! I give it 2 thumbs up :)

Chapter 17... Darling, not only do I like it, I LOVE IT!!! This was PERFECT & BEAUTIFUL!!! The way you wrote this brought out every bit of passion & love that these 2 feel for each other!!! It was STEAMY & romantic the way that they took their time to enjoy sharing each other!!! I ADORE how Severus felt so uncertain that he had pleased her... shows how much he truly loves her!!! BRAVO!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens the morning after!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<

P.S., I am still hoping that things settle down for you!!! Life has a way of being a MAJOR pain in the (_!_) at times!!! Keep your chin up & smile & know that you are being thought of!!!

bloody brilliant! and more realistic you must have done some research. thanks.

Another awesome chapter! I\'m glad they\'re finally together! 8~D

WTF???

I missed a chapter? How the hell did that happen? Oh well two chapters to read, hoo hoo!!

CH15 faves: Made me laugh, Coconuts and big butts, Stephen King\'s \'The Stand\' (greatest book ever written!), Hermione\'s verbal smackdown on Dumbledore and Draco\'s threats.

Ch16 faves: Made me cry, growing up sucks, \'I love you mates\', the music box *sob*, Whistle down the wind, \'for some godforsaken reason one section of my left eyebrow was standing on end and simply would not tame\' my other half\'s does that!!, and the promise of smut!!!

ved ved them both and can\'t wait to see what happens next!!

BTW I do imagine you as you as an Alyson Hannigan look-a-like, Mmmm!!, but it\'s when I start imagining you as an Eliza Dushku look-a-like that you\'d be in real trouble!!!

Kisses & donuts
GrrArrg

Chapter 16... This is BEAUTIFUL!!! Your words have reduced me to a sentimental crying (good tears) woman!!! This chapter was so very touching & filled with emotion, from acceptance to realization to feeling pure love!!! I very much appreciate the fact that you added a touch of humor as well, gives it all a perfect balance!!!

I very much like the way that you wrote Hermione coming to terms with the loss of her friends & family!!! This really touched my heart & hit home for me as I am still working on coming to terms with my mother\'s death!!! I think I will have to come back & revisit this chapter when I am feeling overwhelmed by it all!!!

I think this chapter also gave a very realistic look into one Severus Snape, a man tormented by numerous demons for so long that has now found some form of peace through his love for Hermione & her love for him!!! I can see this man wanting to please his love, comfort her & show her his love, not only say the words!!!

I am very much looking forward to what is yet to come, to her gift to him, their gift to each other!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<

P.S., I will be checking out your new story in a little bit (my little one needs some hugs, okay, I need some hugs), I\'m sure it will be FANTASTIC!!!

DAMMIT!! I thought for sure you were not going to leave us with a cliffie right there!!! Oh well....great chapter, great story. Looking forward to lemony-freshness ;-)

been saving this to read r, cr, can\'t do it at work.

Interesting story. HG an angst ridden teen.

Oh you, you made me cry. Not big sobs or anything like that, but there were a few tears. When Hermione was out at Hagrid\'s hut thinking about her friends and feeling them with her, (sigh) that was really mo. .
I look forward to the next chapter (nudge, nudge, wink, wink).

So what about the \"Domestic Goddess\"? DM for short. Not to be confused with Draco Malfoy. I\'m telling you, I am a HUGE \"Tick\" fan, so it has to be a cheesy super-heroine name. So what is your superher nam name?

Cheers dear!