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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Miki
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Give him hell Hermione! Yes, fingers are never an adequate substitute, but it keeps the raging desire at bay for the moment.

Can't wait to see what Hermione does in retaliation. Purple (not blue) balls on the way.
person pickles87
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello,
very good story. i think i'm all caught up now. love the pranks she is pulling. is his prank on her or the clothing? would be interesting if it was the undies and the she could go to class in commando... lol
waiting for more. p
person Anguloce
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving this...please update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Pornography is the act of watching another party engage in the act of sexual pleasure."? I don't think that Snape would say anything that inaccurate. Voyeurism is the act of watching another party engage in the act of sexual pleasure. Pornography isn't an act at all. Pornography is pictures or writings or similar that have a primary objective of creating sexual arousal.
person mariteri
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Doing a dynamite job as per usual. But I must say I am craving the lemons, not as much as Hermione by the looks of it, but it's still there. Please let there be some in the next chapter? Thanks and keep up the good work.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person BellaBlack
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you story roxyour charicterisation is brill. but i lov Dumbledore best he's a bad ass I almost peed myself laughing when he said shagging. AH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
person Rosebery
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your story, you are such a brilliant author. Please, update this story soon, I have to know how it ends.
person Dragonero
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! I like the banter between hermione and snape best and I am always disapointed, when hermione gives in rather fast. You let the two keep going at each other and keep the story light! Thanks! I hope you update soon!!!
person Andiepants
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! I hope you update soon - I can't wait to see what she's got in store for him. I have to say, I absolutely love your writing style. It's wonderfully witty.