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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person kmplease
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow whats going to happen next, hemione is strong she cant give up that easy,
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see an update to this story. Very well written chapter!
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 20 - I have issues! Even the socially inept would know that doing everything within your power to irritate the hell out of someone else is no way to prove your maturity or gain favorable notice. Trying to let Severus know who the real Hermione is by her being a total ass is running down the wrong road.

The other thing is this spell that Severus cast to cause the all-day assault on HG's breasts ... how could you think that would be sensual? To have a most sensitive part of your body stimulated, nearly constantly, would be nothing more than a huge irritation!!
person mariteri
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was great to see you updating again! Keep up the good work and please update sooner!
person Ladyaph
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
help this is such a good story,

I wanted to flame cos my ass is so big that a roasting may just reduce it;s size but sadly I could not find faults with your often Hilarious but sexy and empathic tale.

Your bit at the beginning of your diclaimers had me laughing out loud.

Will Snape realise that to have Hermione he must first love her as a person and not just for sex

Will Hermione realise that she must keep her plan or at least tell him how she feels

Will Snape survive the onslaught that will come his way when Mr and Mrs Granger find out about him

Do Harry and Draco find acceptance and Will Ron ever grow up

Sorry if I have not reviewed before I was waiting for this tale to finish

A bloody good read

5 stars without saying
person Queen Celestia
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woow you updated. It's been so long I have to reread the entire story..

Not that I really mind :) Don't worry I'm a bad author for updating too <3
person Jennifer
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good work! I loved the chapter. Maybe now they just need to get into one heck of a fight where Hermione inadverdently tells him what she wants and why. Update soon!
person Dreamer022
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more I want more
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good. Write more.
person Chrissie
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write another Chapter soon. I can't wait!!!