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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hummm...curled toes even after five minutShewShew...I have never been kissed like that. Lucky Hermione. I hope you do continue this. I need more.

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person Drea
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great. You really sneak great phrases in, \"prime specimen of future librarian\" has to be my favorite. I\'d like to know what was going on when the phrases were said. The only real critique is that Snape seems a little too unformal in speech.
person spaz141
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The ministry usually has to do something stupid to get a story go I l I like what I read so far. If you write more I\'ll happily read. Thanks.
person shaolin
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good so far...smegging lucky Gryffindors..
they get all the fun...update soon..i\'m waiting
person Mary Kay
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you have done a great job sailing the the good ship HG/SS. I hope that you enjoy it as much as I do. I will look forward to reading this story and will go read your other writings. I didn\'t see any glaring errors in the story, but then English 101 has become nothing but a faint memory. Sail on Captain.

Mary Kay
person Kenly
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is interesting. Poor Hermy. Poor Sevie. I\'m certain things will look up. He\'s gonna like it more than he thought. Betcha. But, I\'ll willingly take Hermy\'s place if she still doesn\'t want him. ^.~
person Gabby
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good job. It was an eableable read. *smile* hope you continue the good work. Oh Yaaay!!! Just noticed I did the first review. ^_^
person Halcyon
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love the school gossip system! I\'m anxious to find out how the wedding night goes, or doesn\'t. :) And I hope that Ron and Harry don\'t turn out to be complete pricks about the whole hasty marriage to Snape thing!
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo.....nice start! Expectantly waiting for more!