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i always do find your stories amazingly funny. I love the next chapter and can't wait for another. Please update soon.
Blessed Be,
Sandra

This is a really great fic! It has to be good 'cos I've read it again in one fell swoop! The characters are not totally OOC and the barbed sniping comments being batted between our two dungeon dwellers are really fantastic!! I especially like the ongoing battle of wills that is driving them batty. I am looling forwrd to seeing how the rest of the story panns out
If I have to make a critique of this work it is simply this....You need to update far faster than you are doing!!
We, your poor, hopelessly hooked readers are needing lots of lovely snarky severus (especially with the black silk boxers *yummy*) in very regular intervals that aren't eons apart!
Hurry and update soon?
Blessings
Amethystique 8-)X

I just read up to this point and I need to take a break... Great story! I am looking forward to the rest!

Chap 21
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I was so happy to see an update from you. I read the entire story over just for the pleasure of it. Too bad Hermione's parents found out the way they did but a fun twist as well. Update as soon as you are able.

And I was beginning to think no one could write a truly excellent Hermione/Severus story anymore! You proved me wrong on that, thankfully! I really enjoyed reading this, the characters are great, the tension is balanced, and the steamy parts are, well, steeeeaaamy!

I like it. Please update soon.

Holy shite!! What a place to leave us hanging. Somehow I could see that happening to me. And Sev... what an ass! Only he would find amusement in a situation so horrificaly (sp) embarrassing. Um, on second thought I laughed so hard I woke up my cat. And he usually sleeps through my varied sounds of glee. ;)

I am officially a new fan of yours bordering on stalkersville =]
This story is simply fantastic... every chapter leaves me longing for more.
Your writing style is so simple yet eloquent.
I love your portrayal of each and every character- it is so true lol.
Please update sooon :)

I am so happy you have finally updated this story!!! It is such a great story, I really like it, even more so now that Hermione and Severus have taken some steps to actually be a married couple. I love the way you presented Severus here, no mushy declarations of love (that will come later I hope....), but an honest declaration on the whish to stay married and have the marriage work. That is, if he survives her fathers reaction.....:-))) I hope you will update again soon, this story is far to well written and intriguing not to be completed! Update again soon!!!