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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good chapter! I really hope that you update sometime soon because the ending is leaving me hanging bigtime! I do a little bit of editing here and there and so far your grammar, syntax, and spelling have been on-point. Keep writing!
Ciao!
Ciao!
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has the beginnings of a great story. I think Snape needs to begin to realize a few things about his new bride. Hermione needs to show some more of that Gryffindor courage and surprise the git.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting; but I don\'t really understand why the hell do they need to dress up for a wedding that neither wanted. It\'s not as if dress is an essential part of a wedding. And why did they come back at all, why didn\'t Hermione, for example, try to escape or \"forget\" until she had to be brought kicking and screaming? And ultimately, why did they obediently say \"I willingly etc\", when it was not willing? Or say, \"I do not\", instead of \"I do\"? Why?
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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes please continue
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic! Can\'t wait for the next chap.
Continue to write and update soon.
Continue to write and update soon.
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that, though it was just a smidge inconceivable since there are ways (in their world) of discovering the truth of the matter. Still, it should be a fun romp, what, what?
Oh, and my favorite line of the whole thing was the part about a look that could kill the joy in a butterfly at 40 paces. That takes the cake!
Oh, and my favorite line of the whole thing was the part about a look that could kill the joy in a butterfly at 40 paces. That takes the cake!
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I got a good chuckle out of this story...but I must admit to burning curiosity...what the HELL were they doing in that room? LOL Please do continue, this is a good story. :)
((raspberries and hugs))
Peeves
((raspberries and hugs))
Peeves
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have one word for you.....WOW....that was an awesome first chapter.....more please......soon.
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Interesting story so far. Can\'t wait for Chapter 2
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MY!!! What in the hell were they doing in the 1st place that ended them up married?!? At 1 point I had thought that maybe this was all a ruse & that she was maybe pregnant & they really wanted to be married, but that never came to be. I can\'t wait for , I , I LOVE THIS!!! Deb >^..^<