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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person nesscafe
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ladydeathfaerie, this story just gets better and better! For a first time SS/HG write you are doing wonderfully! You have them both in character and shooting sparks left and right! Love it! Love it! Love it! Snape & Hermione are my favorite ship! They are so alike and yet different enough to keep things interesting! J.K. will no doubt pair Hermione w/ Ron eventually, but Snape is a better match for her intellect and passion! Oh well, that\'s why I love fan fics! Write on, honey! You\'re doing a fabulous job!
person sinj
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the fireworks and I\'m dying to know what innocent occurence led to their troubles. Post soon!
person Kenly
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is getting good. i like it. keep writing it! i can\'t wait to see what happens within the next week!
person Alraune
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled across this one and I love it. I must confess, that I\'m not only looking forward to the promised smut, I\'m also very curious about the explanation for the strange conversation, that started the whole thing. Please update soon!
person GEmory
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember if I\'ve already reviewed or not, so just wanted to let you know that I loved this. I assume that they won\'t be killing each other and will indeed be shagging in every dark corner within a week? LOL. And what in the world do Albus and Minerva know that they don\'t?
person amanda
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always liked the \'it would never happen in a trillion years, but it\'s still fun to write about it\' fanfics. Nice job on this one. I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter. This should get very interesting.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I nearly choked, I laughed so hard at the opening paragraphs to chapter one. lololol I do have to admit to some curiosity as to what was *really* going on. : )~

I look forward to seeing where you take this, and I hope, too, that we get to find out just what happened that S&H \'don\'t know about\' before too awfully long. LOL


Kiri
person Irol
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what they were doing in the first place that got them in this mess. It\'s an intresting story. Goes to show that almost everyone in the school has a dirty mind. lol. I might have thrown the ring back at him but it does sound like a nice ring and females like pretty things that shine and sparkle. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person wizardingangel
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was very interesting and the fact that most of it is in frist person is great....................I love this keep up the great work and I look forward to another chapter.
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story and the dual POV\'s. I would\'ve made Hermione wear black to the ceremony just to unseat dear little Severus from his bloody high horse. Then again, that\'s me. :) One thing I want to ask, where are her parents in all of this? She\'s still a student, I don\'t remember you saying that they were dead (if you did then, mea culpas). So, I don\'t think that any parent would be uninformed about their child being forced to marry a guy 20 years older than she completely out of hand. Other than that, I think this is a really good story and I would like to see you continue it further.