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Oh gods you are god at this! It is very rare that I find myself reacting quite so strongly as I did while reading this last chapter. You write beautifully ESPECIALLY your lemons. Steam coming out of the ears indeed. Ice was needed to cool down afterwards. While my interest (and raging libido ;-) he he) is captured by your lovely lemony hints, you manage to keep a plot happening that has me interested in what you are planning. I know Albus Dumbledore can be a coniving old coot but I am surprised at the suggestions you are making as to his involvement in the situation between our two heroes. I\'m loving this story and update soon! More lemony goodness please :-)

Evil! That was pure evil!!! Oh my god...the sexual tension is so high right now. Hermione has to do something! She can\'t juct let him walk away without doing anything...I don\'t want her to use Harry or Ron to get back at Snape...but a woman has her needs....even the younger ones. I can\'t wait to see what she does! Ohhhhh...she can go one a date with Seamus or Neville!!! She can be caught making out with Ron....the possibilities are endless. That was pure evil of Snape. Yes she started it but....ahhhh! Okay I am trying not to pull out my hair! Please update soon!!

The sexual power play. C\'mon Hermione, get with it! Stop feeding the anger and use it. Ok, the harangue is over. You\'re having lots of fun with the manipulation, I really want to see Hermione wake up and handle Severus (no pun intended... well maybe not).

These 2 need to get together...I am on the edge of my seat here...pulling on m hair...Wow! Update soon!!!

Okay, now this is getting ridiculous! Update! LOL. J/K. But I really need an update soon! I\'m on the verge of some deadly disease!

Rawr! What a bloody awesome fic! Now I can\'t get my mind off of Snape and coconut oil... Hope you update soon!

mmm..........more please.

this is a darn good fic. pls continue writing. snape is such a sexy bastard. keep him that way. ahaha.

Chapter 4... I think you are doing a FABULOUS job with the characters & the story!!! HOLY MY, this is DELICIOUSLY WICKED, not only the detention, but the aftershocks as well!!! Severus deserved to be sporting that tent!!! What was he thinking?!? He should have known that even under regular terms something like that report may very well get to him!!!

I can only imagine just how HOT it will be when they finally allow themselves to join in the sharing of their desires!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens when they both give in to their wants!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<

Man...For two people who hate each other so much, I look forward the the fireworks and angry sex that they will/must eventually have. The hate and desire they have for each other is spellbinding. I cant wait to see where and when they will join together.

Red