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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Amber
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU\"VE UPDATED!!!!! omg, i have to know what happens next! ... Snape is such a bastard... grrr... quite appealing never the less... please let me know when you will continue!
person Louise
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS!!! Is it hot in her isr is it just me?!?! I may have to leave the room for a few minutes!!! That was the hottest HG/SS sex scene I have ever read!!! What a right bastard for leaving her all horny!!! Could you post the next chapter NOW!?!?!?!?!
person spaz141
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 - Ahhh what a mean \"person with unmarried parents\" great chapter, thanks.
person Alisha
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I\'m downright speechless...That was hot!
person sinj
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*

well, ok, not so speechless, but then it really would be a short review wouldn\'t it... That chapter was just completely awesome! In fact awesome doesn\'t really do it justice. I was gripped from start to finish and incredibly turned on by the end. Severus was absolutely at his maddeningly best and dear Hermione was left undone, how wonderfully delicious. I can\'t believe how hot this fic is and they haven\'t even made it to the true smut yet!!!!

Can\'t wait for the next chapter *offers all kinds of wonderful goodies to aid its appearance* :o)
person Alisha
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have managed to start thinking straight now...lovely lovely chapter! urgh...Severus really needs a kick in the backside. I\'ll look forward to Hermione\'s revenge...I\'m sure it will be most delightful. ;)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... HOLY CRAP!!! Not only is he a bastard, he\'s an EVIL BASTARD!!! I would think that he, being a man, would have wanted to satisfy his needs;-)

I LOVE these PERFECT little bits, they really added to the scenes!!!:
1. She was of the opinion that she was tired enough to sleep soundly without a visit from the Snape smut faerie tonight.
2. It seemed he was not the only one affected by this hate-hate relationship they had.

I can\'t wait to see what she does in retaliation!!! I hope she gets him good & gets to relieve herself in the process, that would be a double slap in his face!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
person Susan
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG..Snape is a bastard! I hope that pay-backs are a bitch! I cannot wait to see how she retaliates.
person Red Writing Hood
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goddess...how fucking EVIL of Severus...evil...evil...evil...LOL. Poor Hermione...getting all worked up an at the last moment...a giant letdown...I cant wait until we get to see her revenge...it whould prove...very enlightening...Moreaseease, dearest!

Red
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well... *fans self* Blimey. Kait