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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person sinj
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*confuddled* There I was all excited, thinking that \'FINALLY, you\'ve posted the next chapter\' but no, you cruelly drew me into a state of anticipation only to dash my hopes :o(

That said, I still loved re-reading the last chapter, in my humble opinion, it\'s one of the hottest bits of writing I\'ve read anywhere! (and that really is something as I\'m a stingy b**** when it comes to complimenting).

However, *begins sharpening various implements of torture* I really must insist that you get the next chapter up soon, otherwise steps will be taken.

:oP
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Bow chicka WOW WOW

You bloody winner. I want some more of that!
person Doll
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...What suspence you build up! It isn\'t a normal romance, and that is all the more beautiful story you have seemed to have produced. I really love this story and hope you continue soon...
person USTMistress
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow-de-wow-wow-wow...omg, omg, omg! Um, coherent thought has left the building. Fabulous, fabulous, wow...higher brain function has ceased....whew.
person Bambu
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a tease Snape is... and so very experienced. I can hardly wait to see what Hermione\'s response to this escalation of sexual gamesmanship you have them playing.
person Kenly
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know it\'s been a long time since I\'ve left feedback, but you know how I get sometimes. =^.^= At any rate, like always, this is great. Seems they\'re both unwilling to give in to exactly how they feel about the other. Idiots. They could be having so much fun right now. And even more playing games with the rest of the school, if only they\'d work together, rather than against one another. *shrugs* But... We know how they both are. *sighs*
person moony_reader
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! You cannot possibly leave it like this! We need closure damnit! I\'m pretty sure you can see the irony of Snape leaving Hermione aroused and frustrated and you leaving your readers the same way. Merciful heavens, please, please continue this!
person Miki
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....oh...oh...oh...myyyyyyyy.........Can you patent Severus\' talented fingers? How hot was that scence? I LOVED that! Okay, I think I\'m going to go now. Don\'t believe I can contruct any coherent sentences anymore.
person ashley
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoo! alright! another chapter. man, i was breathing so damn heavily. pls pls pls. do another one v. soon.
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
they better shag soon!