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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Susan
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Some of the lines you had in there killed me...grin like a giant\'s arse crack! I was worried for a second that she would actually finish him. Thank God our girl got her own back. I am having a much better morning thanks to you! Thank you so much for the update :-D

PS...yes this did just nicely
person Red Writing Hood
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
shew...Now that is what I call revenge. Heheh...good going Hermione. Now...I cant wait to see them both acting out full blown anger and fraustration. The sex should be spectacular. Look forward to reading it!!!

Red
person nesscafe
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH SHAZAM! She is so much braver then I am! I\'m so glad that she wasn\'t dumb enough to release him before she left! I totally don\'t blame her though! I would have done the same thing! Smug bastard! Serves him right! Working her up for a good orgasm and then leaving her flat! He so deserved that!
person Kentucky Fried Frogs
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Hermione is such a bitch.. ah she reminds me of myself. Very hot, fantastic story, i hope you continue it soon!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... This give a whole new meaning to Payback is a Bitch!!! This is DELICIOUSLY EVIL & I LOVE IT!!! I can just see his face as she is walking out the door;-) I am so looking forward to just how STEAMY & HOT it will be when they funally decide to drop the b.s. & go at it til they can\'t walk!!!!!!!!!!!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<

P.S., Albus might want to watch just how he talks to Minerva!!! If he keeps pushing his luck Hermione won\'t be the only bitch one of the men of Hogwarts will have to deal with!!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, men sure are dumb. You would think he\'d have a clue as to how angry she was. No, hew, ew, but let his cock rule him. How typically male of him. Always thinking with his penis.
It was very funny and jusWhy Why is Dumbledore doing this to them? Will we know soon?
It\'s fun and I hope you update soon.
Cheers.
person ArienAstera
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha!! God I love it! That was awesome in more ways than the obvious one. I really can\'t wait for the real thing to \'come\'. Boy that was cheesy. UPDATE!!
person Emily
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good come back on Severus! He most definately deserved it, after what he did to her. Well, please post soon! I anxiously await!!!

P.S. What is dumbledore up too?
person Emily
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is amazing please, keep going don\'t stop. I have to *applause* you have a talent, so don\'t give it up. Oh, and did ntiontion to keep going? Well I guess I did *blushes from embarrassment* anyway.
person elementaldeity
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t let that scene be a dream, I couldn\'t take it. That was evil of him, but so good. won wondering who will break first? Oh well, I\'ll keep reading to find out.

elementaldeity