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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Julie
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Revenge has never been so good! I love it. I love this whole story. I read in your end notes that some people don\'t think there is plot. What are they thinking? Obviously there eyes are being drawn directly to the smut ( which is extremely good...and I wish I had a man right now) but there is a lot of plot going on too. I am wondering what on earth Albus and Minerva saw during the wedding that could be causing so much trouble. Also, there is the whole reason that they were forced to marry in the first place. That hasn\'t come out yet and I am extremely curious. I was wondering if maybe a time turner is being used somewhere. If not then there must have been a previous realtionship between the 2 for them to be acting this badly towards eachother...or maybe ( and this is a long shot) Snape ran across Hermione and someone else...and realized he was jealious? Okay I am thinking about this story way to much. I either need a man or an update! Preferably both! Please update soon!
Julie
person sexypink20022
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it! very nice! esp. the whole game of cat and mouse. i should like to see the next chapter very soon and what it leads it!
person Alcandre
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Wow! Veeeeerrrrrry nice!! Yes, indeed. *clears throat* Yesssssss, I like this story very much! And I can\'t wait for the rest! You have a talent! A wonderful talent! *grins* But stop with the dirty thoughts! I\'m talking about writing!!! LOL Waiting for the rest!!! ^_^
person Velvetina
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god go hermione. That has got to be the hottest thing i have read in a long time. Bloody fucking hell that was amazing and i am so glad i\'ve found this story.
person tothesnakes
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I love it!
person Amber
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... Hermione did the same sort of thing I would have done. YES! \"You are a callous bitch.\"... l. se. serves him right! Please keep writing! I\'ll have a heart attack or worse if I don\'t get more of this story. Perhaps develop a tumor in my brain. Don\'t let me die! please email when you next update again! Thanx in advance.

--Amber
person Bambu
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent escallation of the stakes between Severus and Hermione. I am so very much enjoying the game between them, I can hardly wait until one cracks and refers to the other as their spouse.. in public.
person Echo
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant and Snape is so perfect. A true bastard. I love the way Hermione has paid him back for leaving her in such a needy fashion. I look forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work.
person ashley
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! a new chapter. wahahaha. i cant stand it. he really is such a sexy bastard. i wish my boyfriend were as sexy as him.
person Caliko
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG!! BWAHAHAHHAHAHA!!! GO HERMIONE! LOL! That great big bat deserved that! /snicker/ Bravo! More, please? This was great!