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Oh man, I am soooo glad you updated!!!!!!
I love this story!
I really enjoy the way the two constantly battle with each other and have fun doing it. The smut is great too. This story has it all; sex, drama, humor, romance (well at least the promise of), more sex.
By the way, you might want to check some of your previous chapters. After the last time AFF.net went down, I noticed that bits of the stories got garbled (I always back read the previous chapter before reading the new one). Anyway I noticed that the chapter previous to this one had a couple garbled snippets (things like three words combined with various letters missing). You can figure out what was said by context, but it would probably be annoying to a new reader. The database must have become slightly corrupted; it is not just your story I have found this on (as I said it is not a big deal, I just thought you ought to know).
Anyway, I absolutely adore your story and I hope you update soon!!!!!! ^_^

Funny, how one can confuse hate with passion, love with lust...they may not like each other, but Gods be damned if they cant keep their hands off each other from here on out. I love the build up on this one. Look forward to the next chapter.

Red

hehehehehe... taking a break from studying (finals coming up) and found MORE posted! Happy happy now! /snickering/ Sevvie got a problem.. ~Caliko

Uh-oh.. is Snape gonna get a visit from two irate lions? /Snicker/ even if he did, i think he could send them running. and you were right! VER-RY HOT! ~Caliko

Oh god.. i thought Minerva was gonna have a cow! Hehehehhehehe... and Dumbledore is such an imp! /snicker/ He\'s enjoying this all too much! (But, then again, so am I!) ~Caliko

(BIG Grin... ) and that\'s all i\'m saying.... \"Oh Hubby, dear.. where art thou?\"... (Goes off whistling) (reading 4 chappies one after the other will do that, you know) ~Caliko

I have just read all 11 chapters, It\'s a really good story, love the way they attacked each other with
different potions, the only worry I have is the length of time between updates, hopefully, now you will
update on a more regular time span.

I\'m not so sure that this Severus is out of character... one of his main character traits, I would think, is that he\'s self-serving. In this chapter he certainly is. He\'s not thinking overly romantic tripe -- that would be OoC for this Snape. You\'ve done a wonderful job of having them grow softer toward each other without the quicksand sink into mushiness.

this is the song you said::::::::::Puff,
The Magic Dragon
Puff, the magic dragon, lived by the sea
And frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honalee.
Little Jackie Paper loved that rascal Puff
And brought him strings and sealing wax and other fancy stuff, oh
Puff, the magic dragon, lived by the sea
And frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honalee.
Puff, the magic dragon, lived by the sea
And frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honalee.

Together they would travel on boat with billowed sail
Jackie kept a lookout perched on Puff\'s gigantic tail
Noble kings and princes would bow whene\'er they came
Pirate ships would lower their flags when Puff roared out his name, oh

CHORUS

A dragon lives forever, but not so little boys
Painted wings and giants\'s rings make way for other toys.
One grey night it happened, Jackie Paper came no more
And Puff that mighty dragon, he ceased his fearless roar.

His head was bent in sorrow, green scales fell like rain
Puff no longer went to play along the cherry lane.
Without his lifelong friend, Puff could not be brave
So, Puff that mighty dragon sadly slipped into his cave, oh

CHORUS

By Peter Yarrow and Leonard Tipton On Peter, Paul & Mary\'s
MOVING, IN CONCERT, and 10 YEARS.
Copyright 1963 Pepamar Music.

Thank you for updating. I love this story... It\'s very well written, and I hope you update again soon.