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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Red Writing Hood
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear...that was GOOOOOOD! Nothing like leaving an unfulfilled wife behind. Kind of really makes her want revenge. Good thing that he gave into her demands...huh? LOL...another fantastic and HOT chapter.

Red

person Teacherspet
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LDF, That chapter was amazing. Well written is a compliment your are probably used to but its true. You take the time to FULLY describe the character\'s actions and responses. Also by alternating comfortably between character p.o.v\'s gives the readers a smooth transistion into the mindset/emotions of both Hermione and Snape and makes it feel so real. First class smut too! I\'ll really be happy when you tell us WHAT WAS GOING ON when S@H were overheard :)
person Tris
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! You had me howling with laughter! I was actually crying! I\'m glad I found this one. My night would have been so dreadfully boring if I hadn\'t! By the way, I love smug Dumbledore, and I\'m sure he\'s going to be a right smug bastard when this one is over! LOL
person Pearle
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Whew::....::Fans self::

I think I burned out my batteries! Very hot! I love the last few lines:

Then he frowned. He sincerely hoped that his wife didn\'t snore. That would certainly put a damper on his enjoyment of the rest of the evening.


Well done. As always, I enjoy this and Bound in Leather (had to get that in there...*G*). Take care. ~Pearle
person spaz141
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intense. thanks
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Impressive! -stares lustily- I am eagerly awaiting the next installment, hoping that my expectations will be *fulfilled* so to speak. -winks- I think few can resist a tale of blind lust where hate boils. Not quite sure if you are going to have them fall for eachother, and I am SO excited about finding out what it is Dumbledore knows that we don\'t. teehee Let me know if you need a beta reader, or any help with anything... trying to get a bit of experience before I venture out on my own Snape/Hermione plot venture. Keep up the great work!
person cocoachristy
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis is a great story and I am really enjoying it. I just discovered this website while reading another story on ff.net. This is the 2nd story I have read and I can\'t wait for the update. Would you let me know by email when you do update? Thanks for they terrific stroy!!!
person LoupeyLady
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is great! Please, please write more!
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness (fans hand in front of face). As much as it slightly embarasses me to say, my other half didnt get much sleep the night I read your first smutty chapter. In fact, if you need any ideas?... lol. Mmmmmmmmm Snape (Gazes into space dreamily). xx
person Red Writing Hood
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, close call for those two. Really! I think that would be a very interesting turn of events...grappling with each other while worried about being caught. Ohhh...such a turn on for those two. LOL...TARTS! Love this chapter, want more!

Red