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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person emma436
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was a fun chapter. now you must update this more often buddy! i mean just UPDATE :)
person Amber
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Total Smut.. I like. lol. Loved this Chappie and am very curious to know if Harry, Ron, or Dumbledore, or even all three will notice their missing Gryffindor girl. :) *grins* Wouldn\'t that be fun? lol. Thank you for this glorious chapter and keep writing before I die of fanfiction-withdrawal. :) Keep up the amazing work!!!
person Echo
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, luv. Have to go take a shower now. Cold water!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you updated!!!!!!! Happy, happy...Joy, joy...Happy happy...Joy, joy (reviewer is twirling around madly doing the \'Happy Dance\' ::grin:: ) And, what a way to update! Whew (wipes sweat off her brow), that was no mere smut biscuit, that was a full fledged smut pie! I look forward to your next chapter, the rest of the night and the morning after should be quite interesting. Keep those wonderful chappies a comun. ^_^
person Caliko
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
***very large, extremely satisfied and perverted grin*** OOooooh! That was good! /smirk/ you\'re one of the best at this, you know that right? Anywho, finals were good. got a B in both of them, so I can\'t complain. heheheheheh.... feeling very mellow now, and I can\'t WAIT to see what happens next! ~Caliko
person Metoo2
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it its sooooooooo good man is your smut hot or what (my BF reeps the benifits of course) keep going the idea is good and the stroy is good
person funky_faerie87
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very cool! I loved Hermione\'s description of Severus as a teenage boy. It made the scene clearer in my minds eye... (which sounds rather dirty) .... and makes Hermione\'s decision to masturbate in front of him more realistic. I particularly loved Hermione refusing to go back to her tower and the way she convinced him it was a good idea to let her stay. I\'m beginning to think they\'re growing rather fond of each other!!
person Eddie
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking hot. Totally had me entranced all night long. Damn, I wish I could could write half as good as you do. you better update soon, I really want to know what Mr. Potter intends on doing to a certain Professor he thinks is forcing his best friend to have sex. *squeals* now, I must flitter away to do homework....essays and the like, and you, my dear writter, must create another chapter. May the nine forever shine on your creations. Long Live the Great Muses and Great Writers. Much Love, Eddie the Black Maru
person ladyevilfaerie
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally you got another chapter out I have been waiting a really long time for this! Anyway great chapter you had one mistake out of the whole thing so you did perfectly fine without the bunnies!! This story is getting really interesting, and I just a little suggestion you don\'t have to listen to it but I thought I would throw it out there anyway. Well here it goes, since they\'re not using any kind of protection to keep from getting pregnant maybe you could have Hermione get pregnant...that is the best I could do so don\'t hurt me. After all it is just a suggestion and you don\'t have to use it, it is your story anyway you are the writer so you do what you want I only beta and make suggestions. Well TTFN, SAYOONARA!
person LariLee
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having just read all of this at one go, I\'m happy to find a new favorite. Wonderful, IC job! And Hot as Hot can be!

~Lisa