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by ladydeathfaerie

person JTBJAB
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god....that was sooooo mean to end that chapter there!

I hope you take pity and update soon!
person Tris (A.K.A. BotticellisAngel)
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Filch is a right bastard. I wonder what he\'s gonna do? LOL I love that Snape thinks it\'s sexy when Hermione gets pissed off! I hope she figures that one out and uses it against him! LOL
person Adriana
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How\'s this for a kind word? Wonderful! This is one of the few stories on this site that I\'ve enjoyed in a long time. I look forward to every update and immediately read what you\'ve written. Thanks for the update and keep it going! Please?
person Miki
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I waited until you had updated a few more times, so I would have a nice chunk to read. Terrific! I like how well paced your story is. It is so difficult to write humour, but you\'ve done it very well. Chapter 12 was exactly what you promised (thank you!!) Severus still comes across as nasty, mean bastard - but still sexy as hell. I really like that you didn\'t make Hermione into a beauty queen. Yay for the bush! However, I do want to hex damn Dumbledore - he is so friggin\' meddlesome. Alas, alack I must await your next awesome installment. Keep \'em coming (literally).
person Bambu
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I blinked or something and you posted two chapters... Well, I loved the fact that Hermione got her way and spent the night, even if it was because Severus was lusty. He does rile her up quite a bit, their life won\'t ever be dull and boring. But I especially loved the reveal of Harry and Draco\'s relationship and Ron\'s denseness. How frustrating that Argus Filch has found them... whatever will happen next?
person Cristie
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you came back to this story. I love your writing it is...ummmmm vivid...ya that\'s it. I love the pairing of Draco and Harry and hopefully this little plan will work cause I want more!
person Pearle
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very well done. I see a bit of plot has snuck in there. I like your Snape, great attitude there. Hermione and Snape, Harry and Draco, Harry and Hermione. Do I hear Snape and Draco? Or a foursome? -LOL- Great update.

::sits back in chair::...Okay, Leather is next. Right?

And as a side not, not 100%, but I am getting there! How does 74 and 2/3% sound?
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this story. *nods* I\'m just to chapter 11 and I have to say I like what\'s going on...I like your snape...Hell I like any snape, but the more sarcastic, the better!
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hokay, I finished reading what you have so far...and let me just say...Goodness Sexness. Vivid detail...I\'m going to go blind...I LOVE IT. Someone will just have to read your stories to me in that case *waggles eyebrows* Mmm, to be without sight...something that would only hieghten the senses I think. I like Hermione Having the upper hand and Snape being Smug about being good in bed...I think Hermione needs to show him up...Let him know who really wears the proverbial pants.
person SteffieSnape
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! This chapter was awesome! NO NO it was HOT HOT HOT! WOOT! I\'ve been waiting so long for this chapter and the wait was definitely worth it! Thanks so much for posting! YAY! I shall sleep happy tonight!

Oh the ending was just too perfect! \"After you, wife.\" LOL! That was great! And the snoring thing... what a perfectly Snapey comment! WOOT! Ok can\'t wait to read more! YAY! Toodles!