rate_review Reviews

Your writing was fab as usual, but a word of warning. You don\'t want to be falling into the hole known cliches. The \"Oh everyone and they\'re granddad thinks we\'re lovers and our real lovers are going to have a jealous fit...\" is a pretty old one. It\'s a fine line to walk when you\'re trying to come up with something that\'s interesting. It\'s easy to slip into the cliche trap and more than one writter has done it over the years. Just be aware. Good luck and hope to read more soon.

This is an excellent story. I have enjoyed reading it and couldn\'t stop once I began. I would like to suggest, however, that you proofread your chapters before submission. I saw many typographical errors such as words run together, dropped letters/added letters, spelling mistakes, etc. Much of this could be fixed by reading the chapter aloud to yourself prior to submitting it. (Reading aloud helps you see mistakes better than reading silently because you don\'t just have your brain thinking it sees things correctly. Try it. It works.)

Loves the Clueless!Ron!!!! He always seems to be making someones life difficult!! Loved that Snape found Angry!Hermione amusing! Methinks I sense an angry-sex scene coming up.... please??...... Hermione saying at the end that she\'d never get to shag her husband again was brilliant! and her fascination with his boxers! It\'s all so wonderful! It makes me think that it\'s going to get even more interesting when they start to realise they have feelings for each other! *sits quietly in the corner and waits for smutty update*

A round of applause from me! Thats just fantastic. Im looking forward to your update!

HOLY_SHIZ_NIT! can we get more please!!!!!!! I am so into this stroy!

Once again you have come across with another good chapter, sweetie. Good work. I shall await the next chapter with bated breath.

AHHHHHHHH....... what happens next?!!!!!!! I GOTTA KNOW! Ok I can\'t wait to see what happens! YAY! I hope the next chapter is back to the hottness! And I never suspected Harry and Draco.... hmmm interesting but it works. HAHA! Cool... Toodles!

Loved this story; I can\'t wait for more. I was told of this story in the yahoo group, \"AlanRickmanFanFic\" and so many people were commenting on it that I had to read it for myself, and I\'m glad I did. I keep wondering what exactly Snape and Hermione were doing when their innocent comments were overheard, and why either of them went through the wedding. On the other hand, if they had done anything differently, there wouldn\'t have been this story. Any idea of when another chapter will be finished?

Bloody fantastic! So glad to see you updated! This story is hilarious!

I like u\'r evil bunnies.. hehe. Awesome chappie, ldf. Loved it!!! And what do u know... Harry is gay. nice twist. :) I suggest Hermione and Harry hex Filch and run. lol. The whole \"let\'s pretend we\'re shagging, but really go off to our secret lovers\" thing is going to go wrong... and soon. I can feel it. Ron will catch one of them or something. and Do not let our beautiful Hermione and Harry Die at their lovers hands... that would be awful. Well, I\'m off to sleep.... long day. please let me know when u\'r gonna put up a new chapter! Thank you!!!