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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Christy
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, lady! I did miss the lemons, but it was informative. I liked hearing how Harry and Draco got together. Are you going to go further with the Harry having a baby? That should be a fun read! I am looking forward to Severus trying to get to know his wife, I think that will be fun too. And, also, more LEMONS!! Please update SOON!
person Tris
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. Can\'t wait for more!!
person LariLee
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how much I\'m enjoying this. The fact is, Hermione is right -- all she is right now is a shag. Do I have to actually type the words \"Draco was right\"? I never thought I\'d type that. :-) you\'re doing excellently with the characterizations and I\'m thoroughly enjoying this. Thanks!

~Lisa/LariLee
person Agnes
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ve never written a rewiew till now so I hope you won\'t wait for suggestions of me. There are none. I only love your story. Actually I read all the 14 chapter in one time and I truly enjoyed it. Keep on writing,I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
person Rickmanjunkie
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I must say that it\'s one of my favorites!
person Reikon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I\'m not sure if I ever reviewed before, but I\'ve been following this story for quite a while - I have it bookmarked and everything!

It\'s exquisitely written, and the characters are well-thought out and envisioned. Snape\'s insults blow me away! The chemistry he has with Hermione is beautiful, and I love the addition of HP/DM. I\'ve never been much for that pairing, but I liked it here. =)

I\'ll be eagerly awaiting more chapters. I\'ll just have to figure out something to do until then...

~Rei~
person a_reader
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. I really go for bitchy!Snape. Nice, sweet, guilty, noble Snape is just not Snape, imo. Yours is perfect. He\'s got just enough of an edge to make it seem perfectly plausible that he\'s somewhat domineering and maybe a little bit selfish. Plus, Hermione is such a determined over-achiever that of course she\'s open to exploring new areas.... and someone who will push back just as hard as she does. So, with that said, I am awaiting an update and hoping you haven\'t abandoned this.
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this fic! please update soon!
person Jessii
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
overall this seems to be a nice story (I\'m @ ch.3 right now) but there are a few small mistakes you must fix. The one that jumped the most into my attention was in the beginning of ch.3 : Hermione comes down to breakfast, which suddenly becomes dinner when Snape thinks he doesn\'t want to be sick, then is it breakfast again when Snape rmembers he teaches Griffindors Potions in the afternoon. Do fix
person funky_faerie87
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a really great chapter... despite the absence of smut!! I loved that there wasn\'t a misunderstanding between Snape and Hermione, and Draco and Harry because they were told about the rumours beforehand. I\'m all for conflict, but I really don\'t like misunderstandings in relationships. They only happen when there is a lack of communication and seeing as both Snape and Hermione are very opinionated, I really can\'t imagine that happening to them.

I love that Ron is being such an arse! It cracks me up to see him so clueless!! And maybe this is just me, but all this pregnancy talk is making me think Hermione\'s emotional outbursts might be hormonal. Especially after the reference to having unprotected sex with Snape!! Heehee! Can\'t wait for the update!!