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Embarrassed at being bookmarked? You\'re too modest, you know. I\'m surprised more people haven\'t bookmarked you. Or... perhaps they have, they just haven\'t said anything.

But besides that, this is another amazingly written chapter. I love your descriptions, you know? \"Thick sludge of overworking hormones\"... I can picture Draco churning out purple-grey sludge as he walks; it\'s both kind of creepy and interesting at the same time - the visual.

I liked that there was no lovin\' going on in this chapter (althought it would have been nice, heh). It gave you ample opportunity to develop the characters, which you did wonderfully, as always. I\'m quite interested to see Snape\'s attempt at getting into Hermione\'s head instead of her skirt - and her reaction to his attempt. Will she be touched emotionally? (She\'s already been touched physically...) Or will she disregard his sudden interest in contempt? Gah! Who knows?

And now for the ultimate flattery (to get you to write more, hehe): If JK Rowling is a god, then you must be a minor deity. Did that come out right? I hope it did. I really like this fic. SS/HG is the only het pairing I like and you write them so well! Anywho... It\'d be best if I didn\'t clutter up your reviews with babbled flattery... You have to make sure there\'s room for more flattery, right?

Patiently awaiting the next chapter,

-Reikon

HAHA! This was so great! Woooooo! Awwww poor little Severus... not being able to shag his wonderful little wifey! Muahahahaha!!! I love the fact that you are holding off on the shags for now! I know Severus hates it, but it will be so much HOTTER when he has to wait for it! muahahaha!! Yeah, I guess I am evil in a way, muahahahaha! I\'m so so glad you love my evilness! Torturing Snape is so much fun, isn\'t it? *sigh* How I love him so. Ahhh I can\'t wait for more! Toodles!

Hiya! This is loads of fun and I\'m enjoying it immensely. (Yay, I\'m up to chapter 12!)
I haven\'t read any of the feedback so I don\'t know if this has been pointed out before but \'starkers\' means \'naked\'. I know the phrase is \'stark raving mad\' but honestly, \'starkers\' can\'t be used as a contraction of that, it\'s a completely seperate word.

Aside from that small niggle this is good. I love the way you\'re building up their relationship via escalation, and what the hell is Dumbledore up to?

GO hermione!!!! Men are pigs and that\'s the way to treat them....although our fav couple will have angry sex in the next chapter right? hurry and uptade as soon as possible, you\'re doing such a crazy wicked job!!!

YES, I like this chapter...now, I have more questions...Why does Poppy want to see Hermione?? When is Severus gonna stop being such a prat? Why did you have to stop there? When will you be updating again??Can\'t it be done sooner???

Enjoying the story...PLEASE update again soon!!!!!

Glad that you have updated SSW!! It was a good read and though no smut... No matter... It was good... Can\'t wait for the next one!

I was so happy to see a new chapter from you. I quite like the rolling emotions you give to Hermione and Severus... it\'s actually quite funny to think of Harry and Draco being the more stable couple! I really liked both young wizards in this, and I think you\'ve done a terrific job with both Snape and Hermione. I can just see Severus writing a note to Hermione, \"What\'s your favorite color? What are your parents names? They\'re dentists, right? Ok, is that enough conversation... can we shag now?\"

Wow! Everyone\'s getting so emotional! I love it! I especially loved Draco giving Snape relationship advice, it just seems so perfect for this fic. Snape might be the grown-up but he sure doesn\'t act like it. I\'m thinking that ickle Hermione is going to be peeing on a stick for Madam Pomfrey in the next chapter! Can\'t wait! Snape trying to be a real husband should be interesting too!

I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Hi, love the story, please post again soon. Thanks.