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for She Said What?

by ladydeathfaerie

person Ailo
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter but I was longing for some good Sevvie/Hemione interaction this chapter since there was hardly any in the previous chapter either. I hope there is some in the next chapter, even if there aren\'t lemons I at least need a good argument or three :D Look forward to seeing the next chapter as soon as you can get it out! Thanks!

~Ailo
person Bambu
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find myself snickering as I think of what Hermione and Minerva will be up to during Hermione\'s detention. Snape, with all his manipulative, conniving mannerisms really doesn\'t stand a chance, does he? See... I\'m doing it again! I quite liked this chapter, and just how cutting Hermione was to Poppy. It\'s interesting to think just how poorly most adults think of teenagers. I loved the paragraph you included about Poppy clearly never having thought about a student taking precautions. It was a beautiful moment, and so very, very telling.
person calamitysandra
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!!! Great!
I am really looking forward to how this will work out.
Give it to Snape!

Sandra
person Pam
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi...I\'m so glad you posted. I love Hermione\'s attitude. She\'s such a spirited person. Keep up the good work, and post again soon. Thanks.
person Anguloce
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg this rocks! please please please continue, this is both hot and hysterical.
person cocoachristy
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! Can\'t wait for next chapter now! (Please...Not too long????!) I want to see what Severus does with all that advice, I want to see the advice Minerva gives Hermione and I can\'t wait to see the next interaction between the two of them! I will anxiously await your update!!! ;-)
person Michael
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you better finish this one or I\'m going to cry!
person elementaldeity
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo. I\'m currently doing the happy dance for a new chapter. Poor Severus. He\'s in for it now.
person DawnEB
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story (except the long time between updates :)) but thought you might have abandoned it. So glad you haven\'t. Hehe, everyone giving Snape advice on relationships, while Hermione and Minerva plot against him. I have visions of him trying his hardest to get answers to some of the questions Draco and Dumbledore brought up; \'So tell me, Wife, what is your favourite colour? *hexs Snape\'s hair blue* \'Figure it out\'.
person lol
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic, are you gonna continue?