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Reviewing Chapter 16...

Very good story so far. I like how pissed off Hermione is getting. Bitchfest is coming up I suspect, lol. Please update soon! I look forward to seeing what occurs next!

I hope that Severus will clue in eventually and learn to talk to her as a human being!

::smiles:: I never thought tp come across a fanfic that\'s employed all three of my favourite ships in one, but here it is! Despite that the Harry/Hermione bit isn\'t sexual, there\'s such tenderness there... ::whistful sigh:: I hope you keep your inspiration and your motivation to write and update regularly, for this is a fantastic story; really. Thanks for all the fun times and laughs I had in the most conspicuous of places and inopportune times!

Fabulous! One of the best chapters yet! I laughed so hard at Hermione pulling a Snape-ism on Madam Pomfrey! I did want to see her slap Ron though, the prat totally would have deserved it. Dumbledore giving marriage advice made him seem even more annoying, I mean, how can he force two people to marry and then expect their relationship to be all sunshine and lollypops?! Crazy old bugger!! I\'m really looking forward to hearing McGonagall\'s advice for Hermione. Keep up the brilliant writing!

hey!!! I love your story so far... I just started it a couple of days ago and just finished it... you have great writing skills and it is a great idea too! I hate when I get to a story with a good idea but the person writing it isn\'t very skilled! I just wanted to tell you that I think your story is great and keep going!!!

Ch.16 - Oh brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely freakin brilliant!!!!!! McGonagalls\'s reply was absolutely fantastic!!! \"make his life a living hell\" hahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! Seriously, wow...... that totally made my day!!!! Wooooooooo!

ok, so this little torture-time for Snape is doing some damage, eh? muahahahahaha! I love it! I love Snape in all his snarky-glory too, don\'t lose that!!! it\'s what makes him so delicious!!!! mmmmm..... so yummy!!! *slaps self* Anyways..... this was absolutely brilliant, i can\'t say more than that! I loved the conversations between Snape and DD as well! DD is soooooo smug is hilarious!!! But seriously, Snape needs a good kick in the arse! He needs to realize Hermione is not just his porperty as wife... she\'s a human with emotions and feelings! The thing is... I think he realizes that she is getting to him in ways he never imagined and I soooooooo love that! hahahahahaha!!!! Really.... Snape is going to be hit upside the head and he won\'t know what hit him! Ah, yes...... he will soooo enjoy the sexmore when he realizes she\'s a human and not a toy, muahahaha! Oh but I must admit.... making Hermione evoid him is killing him and it is sooooo amusing and satisfying to watch Snape try not to crumble, hahahahaha!

Oh wow, as you said before... I am soooo evil.... but what can I say..... Snape does something tome and it sparks a flare within me I cannot control! It is the utter and uber deliciousness of that one and all mighty god called Severus freaking Snape the snark-master!!!! Sigh..... I can\'t wait to see his attempts at getting to know Hermione in more than just a physical way! hahahahaha! This is going to be one exciting ride, and I hope I get front seat to the show! wooooooooooo hooooooooo!!!! Update soon darling! I love it!!!! I hope my semi-evilness sparks you, hahaha! Toodles!

I hope Snape makes it through the night because Hermione could kill about now. The story is great so far, but ah,what were H & S talking about in the first place?

love it. keep it up. i hope mione and minerva find a good way to tortue severus. can\'t wait for more.

oh, please, please, please update soon! fantastic cliffhangers!

Well I\'ve just read through your entire story (in two sittings!!) and generally speaking I loved it. I\'m going to risk you taking this next comment as a flame but it isn\'t thoughtless criticism, in fact quite the opposite - I\'ve put in quite a bit of thought before posting this. OK, disclaimers out of the way! LOL. I loved the premise of this story and even though the forced marriage was a bit dodgy it was all very funny. Also, you are right, you write lemons very well, no doubt about it. The cat and mouse game was very entertaining. But, once the shagging started some of your story went downhill a bit, and the characters started going quite out of character (perhaps for me the language was a particular thing - mind you the \"queer as a 3 pound note\" was priceless!). You are a really good writer, especially of comic stuff, but Ron has become a caricature and you can do better than that. Also, Poppy would not force an exam, that was a bit weird. Draco and Harry were brilliantly done. I guess this felt like a pwp that got too long. I\'m definitely going to look for more of your writing. Now, if you wish to roast my arse go right ahead, I can take it!

I am soooo sorry for not reading these last few chapters until now. I have been very very lax in my reading times. I do like this latest chapter. Romance advice from both Draco and Albus...shiver me timbers...who would have thunk that they would both think the same way. Personally, I like Minerva\'s thoughts better. LOL

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