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for Secrets In The Eyes Of The Enemy

by Hunnypeach

person kat
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!! U HAVE TO WRITE MORE, MORE I TELL U!!!! OMG this is such a good story. i have followed it from the first one and u almost made me cry! i love this bitter sweet story. :] keep writing, i will keep checking 4 updates...:] p.s. ur very talented keep it up!
person Narcissa Black
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, dammit, write more, write faster. This seems to have been sitting idle for some time. Surely, this is a correctable set of circumstances? We wait. Not very patiently, but we wait.
person sbkar
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Jaden doesn\'t buy it that Hermione is his mother... Now, what\'s happening? Need you, oh author, to let us know...
person katrina
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! you have to write more and fast! i have followed this story from In The Eyes Of The Enemy, it is so good. its so great that you write such wonderful stories like this. Please keep it up! i love this story!!
person kami
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay i have read the first part of this story and was cursing you quite vehemently for the cliffie and now i am BEGGING you to finish this second part of the story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I have been in tears several times now in both parts and am going to go insane if i don\'t know how it ends. I realize it has been almost a year since your update but if you could find it in your heart to finish this part I would be eternally grateful.............................Thanx Kami
person lala
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
email me when you update dammit!
veryveryvery good
person Lee Swain
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon, can\'t wait to see where this is going. I hope Hermione wakes up, but who knows what the future holds.
person Chrissy
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. I just love this story. I wonder what there going to do with Jaden. What about Pansy?
person Latricia
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is wrong with you? How could you leave a person hanging like that? That\'s just plain wrong. (LOL) Please i am begging you *on bruised knees* to please continue. This is the most intense story i have every read on this website. What can i say about this story. AMAZING!!! BRILLANT!! AWESOME!!, need i continue. Please continue. I have noticed a few things that i find commendable.
1. Pansy Parkinson stealing the twins. That is amazing and spellbounding. I would of never thought that she would of stooped that low to get something that belonged to Draco Malfoy that bad; but i guess i was wrong.
2. That she had built up the image that she was the most intellectual or brillant witch in hogwarts. This was hilarious. How could Pansy Parkinson be like Hermione Granger?
and finally;
3. Draco roughen up Jaden (also known as Romeo). He is just like Draco. But I must admit, he was clever. I loved how Draco would kill for Hermione; That is so romantic.
Can you Please continue. I am addicted to this story. I love this story and I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for this story. *hands together and on knees *again** Please Continue. (I really have it bad when it comes to stories like this.)

ONCE AGAIN; GREAT STORY.
person luvJD
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update, update, update. it\'s a good story so far & don\'t keep us in suspense, update, update, update