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Wow! I've read both. The first was just 'oh Merlin!' You evil person to end on such a note!:-p Can't wait to see where you take Jaden/Romeo.

OH MY GOD!!!!! YOU'VE MADE ME CRY WITH THE STORY, IT ALWAYS MAKES ME CRY WHEN HERMIONE IS SAD. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER. KEPP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!! YOU ARE TOO GODD AT IT!!! :D

hi, i have read both stories and i love them. Are you ever gonna finished this one?. It is a great story!! Please update.
It would be nice like sam says that you put kind of a journey to the past were the twins can see their parents. thank you for posting. Carol

Oh that was good

I so need to know what happens next. That last chapter was edge of your seat. I'm still on the edge wanting to know whats going to happen next.

OMG! Your stories are awesome. However you reall really really really doneed to get on with the upates. It's not kind to leave your readers hanging in rude suspense like this! Now with that said, I hope you've scurried off and have started writing furiously so that our minds can be put at rest.

Freakin update the story if you start a story finish it its driving me mad

its a relli gud storie but i was wonderin when u were gonan update it.

hey,
i just finished reading your 'In the eyes of the enemy' and its sequel.
they are absolutely spiffing,incredible work
i am a little intersted in reading stories by many writers over the net and have often noticed some flaws that may have escaped their scrutiny and i would luv 2 tel u that your work is very good compared to many others i have read
i seldom come across such good works so i thought it would b appropriate to congratulate u for ur work.
i would also like to give some points which i have enjoyed and a few which may need your attention
1.the way in which u recite the story is good
2.ur explanations of their feelings proves your writing skills
3.the plot u have spinned is also intersting
4.the way the first part ended is interesting
5.the way u hav written the sexual scenes and romantic scenes are very much fuelling the imagination
plz give some time to check whether wat i am saying below needs your attention or not
1.please give paragraph or indents in order to facilitate reading
2.if you think neccessary try a little focus on other couples
think about these suggestions too,
a future or a past travel(like the one in harrys 2nd year) for the twins that is, then how about some sexual references of the lead pair and i would greatly suggest a much more detailed future of the twins and the other characters(of the younger age) which may require another sequel
so in all i request you to continue your splendid work and give atleast two more sequels to this story
with a lot of love,
sam
p.s.if i have hurt your feelings or abilities please forgive me and consider this for your welfare,luv,sam

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is Snape gonna save Hermione's butt already?! get on with it!! next chapter please!! arg!!

This fic is so great! Please update the suspense is killing me! :D