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for Secrets In The Eyes Of The Enemy

by Hunnypeach

person Phantasia
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy read your stories please contuine to write.
Phantasia
person Washu
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story I hope you continue writing it! The last one you wrote I cried, I know it sounds pathetic, but you should be honered I that means your story touched me. I love them they are so romantic. I hope you write more.
person C. C.
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Those story are fantastic!! I am mesmerized by your narration. But I beg you, please let this sequel be a happy ending, please! (Can\'t wait to read the end) -__-;;
person jeannette
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon...........i loved the first story.i think this story is going to be just as wonderful.please e mail me when you get more chapters up.i\'d like to know if rose starts to realize hermione is her mother,and if jaden decides to threw with poisoning hermione.i hope pansy gets the kiss of the dementers for murder and kidnapping.maybe dumbledor can do a magical paternity test for the twins so they can have proof that hermione is their mother.i have the stories that you have written in my favorites file so i can reread them if i come across any boring stories.
person April
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good job so far..please post more soon!!!
person Jenna2231
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! I loved it, absolutely LOVED it! I was so upset with the clifhanger ending you had on your other fic, it seemd time passed slowly only to spite me. Hehe! But here is the beginnings of the new one, and seems to be even more intense than your last. I can\'t believe that Jaden and Rose\'s \"mother\" would kidnap those kids like that, in hopes of getting Draco back. That is purely idiotic. Does the woman have no brains at all? I know if someone kidnapped my children in hopes of regaining my partnership, whatever that may be, I would absoloteuly loathed them.

Oh, and about the whole potion she sent to seemingly kill Hermione. I wonder if that is a wizarding Snow White thing or not... And if he does give it to her, if Rose will be the one to get what happened out of Jaden, and if she would tell Draco or Albus... or if Murtle would over hear it... so many possibilities! I hopet don\'t kill Hermione... that would be quite upsetting, yet an unexepcted twist.


Looking forward to hearing more. You\'re honestly gifted.
person Lace
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another well plotted story! I\'m looking forward to the coming chapters! Well done!
person Genita
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh is is SO good...please hurry with more- and let\'s see if I\'ve got it all right. Draco and Hermione\'s twins were abducted by Pansy Parkinson...Narcissa and wormtail are all the way into it up to their eyeballs. (They\'ve also pretty much brain washed the twins- all in the name of revenge to get Draco back on their side...) My take on it? All hell\'s going to break loose when all this comes out....and the ones that crossed Draco and Hermione- along with the twins are gonna regret it BIG TIME...oh yeah- and those charges that have came out- I think they\'re lies to but Romeo up to killing his OWN true mother?! either way, I can\'t wait to see what happens!
Genita
person Talaymina
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story has started. I hope you will update soon.
person Jules
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see this sequel being posted. I enjoyed your story TEOTE. It is hearbreaking to read about the sorrow which surrounds Draco & Hermione. And now to see that who was involed and the twins hatred of their parents sets up a great fic. I await your next post!