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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:
Lack of action? There were action aplenty! *smiles* I\'m enjoying the story that I\'ve only begun reading. The plot is interesting, and I\'m intrigued by how you are going to continue the story.
Lack of action? There were action aplenty! *smiles* I\'m enjoying the story that I\'ve only begun reading. The plot is interesting, and I\'m intrigued by how you are going to continue the story.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great!
So glad this has been updated. Severus to the rescue!
Enjoying the plot twists and drama with Draco, Hermione & the twins.
Looking forward to seeing how Hermione gets better.
So glad this has been updated. Severus to the rescue!
Enjoying the plot twists and drama with Draco, Hermione & the twins.
Looking forward to seeing how Hermione gets better.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fangirl squeals* I love your writing. I wasn\'t sure what I would think of the first story when I started reading and it was so good I read it and what is posted of this one in one sitting. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapters *o*
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i think u are as eally good writter especially Draco and Hermoine pairing pleas4e continue with tis story as it is really aswell as update any other story in ur new name cough ATLANTIS cough
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first fic. And this one only adds to the mystery. But I think it is unfair of you to make them hate their parents, but that only makes it better. I still think that pansy is a bitch that should have died in the first fic you wrote. But you have to make them realize that hermione is their mother, I just couldn\'t believe it when I read that Jaden was going to kill his mother. I love your writing and will now be an avid reviewer. Please update soon.
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just wondering when you are going to update this fabulous story? I also wanted to say that you have a great wng sng style and i love these storys. I surpe tpe the twins find out what really happened and that Jaden gives the sleeping draught of death to that BEOTCH pansy.
Jaqui
Jaqui
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The first one waazinazing and this one is shaping up to be the same. When I finished reading the first one I suspected Pansy immediately, but I wonder how Narcissa and Peter got out of the jar without Dumbledore. Well you haven\'t updated in awhile, so I hope you haven\'t quit on this fic. I will keep checking in! Great work!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!
I have just spent a good part of the afternoon reading \"In the eyes of the enemy\" and then went straight on to this and I am hooked absolutely and completely.
Please please update it soon!!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
I have just spent a good part of the afternoon reading \"In the eyes of the enemy\" and then went straight on to this and I am hooked absolutely and completely.
Please please update it soon!!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOHHHHHH such a GREATE story!!! can\'T believe it...i love it....i love Draco anyway...but your one....ahooooo*sigh*
please update soon!!
bye distel
please update soon!!
bye distel
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the Prequel to this and finished chapter 4 of this one... These are AWESOME!!! PLEASE update. I love the way it\'s going so far. Poor Malfoys - all 4 of them.